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Kupon na wykonanie skoku na bungee lub skoku ze spadochronem stał się ostatnio
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Nowadays presents people receive are getting more and more unusual. There has always been a problem when it comes to giving gifts. It is believed that the appropriateness of the given gift represents feelings of the giver. This essay will examine whether the recently upcoming kinds of gifts among youth are appropriate and well-aimed.
At the top of the list is the gift of the bungee jump, then parachute jump. Both activities may seem scary as well as fascinating. It should be noted that the impression that the present make is rarely the same for the receiver and the giver.
Most of the youth assume that such unusal present would surprise and fascinate. The bungee jump as well as the parachute jump are excellent for gaining the life experience, overcoming fears or simply having fun. According to the majority of jumpers a little fear before the jump is worth the experience. It is believed that the gift of the possibility of doing something is far more appealing than the gift of thing, that may never be useful.
On the other hand, there are those who do not thing jumping of any kind is enjoyable and may even consider such activity as a life-threating. Research shows that 50 % of the youngers would be more satissfied with getting money. Another argument is that try of the jumping is connected with going to the bigger city, which may be considered as uncomfortable.'
All in all, one rule remains unchangeable - when buying present, people should always bear in mind the character and needs of the receiver. The level of the acceptation of the bungee jumping or the parachute jumping is certain to be different by each one member of the society.

dany podarunek = a gift, nie kombinuj z given
czyje uczucia? dającego, a więc to sa konkretne uczucia
gift of the bungee jump = 'dar skoku na bungee', tak jakby ktoś miał taki dar, rozumiesz. Musisz to zmienić
make zla forma
most young people
present jest policzalny
fascinate ale kogo?
gaining experience in life - ale to wielka przesada, daj spokój
jezeli that=który, nie stawia się przecinka
co to za czasownik thing
'zagrażający życiu' - sprawdź pisownie i też uświadom sobie, ze to jest tylko przymiotnik
co to youngers
satisfied to do sth...
nie rozumiem try
nie rozumiem the bigger city - są dwa miasta w pobliżu i jedziesz do większego?
nie uzywaj 'as' po consider
bez the przed jumping
for each member of society

Nowadays (tu brakuje przecinka ) (brak przedimka) presents people receive are getting more and more unusual.
It is believed that the appropriateness of the given gift represents (brak przedimka) feelings of the giver. This essay will examine whether the recently upcoming kinds of gifts among (dalabym przedimek tutaj) youth are appropriate and well-aimed.
At the top of the list is the gift of the bungee jump, then (brak przedimka) parachute jump.
It should be noted that the impression that the present 'make' (present - 3os.l.poj, dostosuj) is rarely the same for the receiver and the giver.
Most of the youth assume that such 'unusal' (blad ortog) (brak przedimka) present would surprise and fascinate. The bungee jump as well as the parachute jump are excellent for gaining 'the' (zly przedimek) life experience, overcoming fears or simply having fun.
It is believed that the gift of the possibility of doing something is far more appealing than the gift of (brak przedimka) thing, that may never be useful.
On the other hand, there are those who do not 'thing' (ortog) jumping of any kind is enjoyable and may even consider such activity as 'a' (niepotrzebny przedimek) life-threating. Research shows that 50 % of the 'youngers' (ortog) would be more 'satissfied' (ortog) with getting money. Another argument is that 'try of the jumping' (tego calkowicie nie rozumiem) is connected with going to the bigger city, which may be considered as 'uncomfortable' (zle slowo).'
All in all, one rule remains unchangeable - when buying (przedimek) present, people should always bear in mind the character and needs of the receiver. The level of the acceptation of the bungee jumping or the parachute jumping is certain to be different by each 'one' (niepotr) member of the society.

Zrob cos z tymi przedimkami (a, an, the), nie wiesz jak ich uzywac,m a na tym poziomie to oczekuje, ze akurat to, powinno byc bezblednne. Drugie, nie za bardzo lubie czytac slow, ktore sa zle napisane (blad ortog). Prosze zawsze po pisaniu, jeszcze raz przeczytac i wychwycic wszystkie bledy ortog, bo to swiadczy o tym, ze nie masz szacunku dla osoby sprawdzajacej.

dzieki wielkie za sprawdzenie :) rzeczywiscie z tymi przedimkami strasznie ;p nie wiem co mi w glowie siedzi ze tak robie