Prośba o sprawdzenie tłumaczenia krótkiego tekstu z polskiego na angielski

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Witam, prosiłbym o sprawdzenie tekstu moich tłumaczeń z polskiego na angielski i w miarę możliwości wytknięcie wszystkich błędów, wskazanie alternatyw lub lepszych odpowiedników słów oraz błędów składniowych i w samym tłumaczeniu.

Z góry dziękuję za poświęcony czas.
Pozdrawiam.


Jak kawa wpływa na ludzki organizm?

Z mitami na temat kawy zmagamy się od setek lat, ale współcześnie można się posiłkować badaniami naukowymi. Uczeni starają się sprawdzić, czy kawa faktycznie wpływa na serce, powoduje bezsenność, ale też zbadali jej związek z odchudzaniem.

Kawa to napój z odpowiednio przygotowanych ziaren kawowca. Pochodzi z Etiopii i gdy kawa trafiła do Europy, sprzedawcy innych napojów starali się już na starcie zniszczyć konkurencję i rozpowszechniali o niej najdziwniejsze informacje. Gazety donosiły, że kawa to nie wywar z zamorskich roślin, ale np. "odrażający wywar ze starych butów.”

Badania nad wpływem kawy i herbaty na organizm prowadzono już dawno temu. Podobno król Szwecji Gustaw III postanowił osobiście sprawdzić szkodliwość tychże, ale nie na własnym organizmie. Dwóm skazanym na śmierć bliźniakom zamienił wyrok na dożywocie, pod warunkiem że każdy z nich będzie codziennie spożywał kilka filiżanek napoju - jeden kawy, a drugi herbaty. Poza tymi napojami mieli jednakowe, przyzwoite warunki życia. Celem doświadczenia było sprawdzenie, który z nich dłużej pożyje i w jakich męczarniach umrze. Lata mijały, a panowie żyli sobie dość spokojnie, choć w zamknięciu. Zmarł lekarz nadzorujący więźniów, potem drugi, a w końcu odszedł też Gustaw III. Bliźniacy żyli nadal. Pierwszy z nich zmarł w wieku 83 lat - ten pijący herbatę. Jak widać, kawa wcale nie zabija ani nie przyczynia się do przedwczesnej śmierci.

Kawa nie jest ani dobra ani zła. Dziś wiemy, że indywidualna reakcja ludzi na kawę jest niezwykle różna, choćby dlatego że każdy z nas jest inny. Kofeina faktycznie wpływa na uwalnianie zmagazynowanego w ciele tłuszczu, ale będzie pomocna w odchudzaniu tylko pod pewnymi warunkami. Już w 10 minut po jej wypiciu ciało zaczyna spalać o około 13 proc. kalorii więcej. Ale aby tak się stało, trzeba się ruszać. Pozostanie w spoczynku i picie nawet kilkudziesięciu filiżanek kawy nic nam nie da.

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How coffee affects the human body?

We have been struggling with myths regarding coffee for hundreds of years, but nowadays we can avail ourselves of what scientific research have discovered. Scientists are trying to check whether the coffee indeed affects the heart and causes insomnia but they also studied its relation to slimming down.

Coffee is a drink made of correctly prepared coffee beans from the Coffea plant. It originates from Ethiopia and when it reached Europe, dealers of other beverages immediately strived to destroy the competition and spread the most bizarre information about coffee. It was reported in the newspapers that coffee is not a decoction of overseas plants but a disgusting beverage made of old shoes.

Research on the effects of coffee and tea on the human body were conducted a long time ago. Supposedly, king Gustav III of Sweden decided to personally verify the harmfulness of those drinks, but not on his own body. The twins sentenced to death were offered a mitigation of sentence to life imprisonment but in exchange, they were supposed to drink a few cups of beverage a day – one of them coffee, the other tea. Besides this difference, they had the same, good living conditions. The aim of this experiment was to determine who will live longer and if they will die an antagonizing death. Years went by and the twins lived peacefully, albeit in confinement. The doctor who supervised prisoners passed away, so did another one, eventually Gustav III of died too. And the twins lived on. The first twin died aged 83 – the one who drank the tea. As you can see, coffee neither kills nor contributes to premature death.

Coffee is neither good nor bad. Nowadays, it is known that the individual response to coffee is diverse, if only because everyone of us is different. Indeed, caffeine influences the release of stored body fat, but it will be helpful only under certain conditions. The body begins to burn about 13 per cent more calories just in 10 minutes after drinking coffee. But you need to move to do so. Even drinking a few dozen cups of coffee will have no effect, if you remain at rest.
brak inwersji w pytaniu na poczatku
scientific research have - niegramatyczne
the coffee - zly przedimek
were conducted - niegramatyczne
one of them was coffee... the other was tea
if only - niezrozumiałe
1. Nie bardzo rozumiem co tam poprawić, przy pisaniu sugerowałem się tym nagłówkiem z Telegrapha; http://www.telegraph.co.uk/food-and-drink/features/how-coffee-affects-your-body-from-the-first-sip/
2. scientific research HAS
3. a coffee
4. Was conducted
5. Poprawione.
6. Miało być to https://www.facebook.com/prawdziwyangielski/posts/763[tel]
Nie sprawdzam tlumaczenia, tylko bledy ang.
We have been struggling with myths regarding coffee for hundreds of years, but nowadays we can avail ourselves of what scientific research 'have' (tutaj research 'has') discovered.
Scientists are trying to check whether the coffee indeed affects the heart and causes insomnia (tutaj potrzeba przecinek) but they also 'studied' (zly czas, dlaczego zmieniasz czas w ciagi zdania?) its relation to slimming 'down' (wg mnie niepotr).

Coffee is a drink made of 'correctly' (wg mnie zle slowo) prepared coffee beans from the Coffea plant. It originates from Ethiopia and when it reached Europe, dealers of other beverages immediately 'strived' (wg mnie to jest zle, slyszalam o 'strove' - ale to moze byc b. starodawne, sprawdze w moim slowniku - tak, strove jest o.k. to taki sam czasownik jak 'drove'-jechal) to destroy the competition and spread the most bizarre information about coffee. It was reported in the newspapers that coffee is not a 'decoction' (slowo jest ok, sprawdzilam) of overseas plants but a disgusting beverage made of (tutaj mozna dodac 'smelly') old shoes.

Supposedly, 'king' (wg mnie duza litera) Gustav III of Sweden decided to personally verify the harmfulness of those drinks, but not on his own body. 'The' (niepotr) Twins sentenced to death were offered a mitigation of sentence to life imprisonment but in exchange, they were supposed to drink a few cups of beverage a day – one of them coffee, the other tea.
The doctor who supervised (brak przedimka) prisoners passed away, so did another one, eventually Gustav III of died too.
1 w tamtym nagłówku nie ma znaku zapytania, a u ciebie jest
3 samo coffee, bo mówisz ogólnie o kawie
6 ok, nie znałem tego
Terri - naniosłem sugerowane przez Ciebie poprawki, ale mam jeszcze kilka pytań i prosiłbym o odpowiedź w wolnej chwili.

Coffee is a drink made of 'correctly' (wg mnie zle slowo) prepared coffee beans from the Coffea plant.
- tutaj nie mam pomysłu na to słowo zamiast correctly, może well/thoroughly/rightly/aptly?

Scientists are trying to check whether the coffee indeed affects the heart and causes insomnia (tutaj potrzeba przecinek) but they also 'studied' (zly czas, dlaczego zmieniasz czas w ciagi zdania?) its relation to slimming - racja, czy tutaj mogę pociągnąć całe zdanie w Present Continuous? Byłoby "Scientists are trying to check whether coffee (bez żadnego przedimka, prawda?) indeed affects the heart and causes insomnia, but they are also studying its relation to slimming.




Zielonosiwy - 1; czy "How does coffee affect human body?" będzie tu ok? 3 - poprawione.
jezeli to ma byc pytanie, to tak
bo w tym the telegraph naglowek znaczy '(wyjasniamy) jak kawa...' i moze ty tez chcesz tak miec
the human body
Ostatnie zrobiłem tak: "How does coffee affect the human body?"


Jeszcze co do Coffee is a drink made of 'correctly' (wg mnie zle slowo) prepared coffee beans from the Coffea plant. [oryginał: Kawa to napój z odpowiednio przygotowanych ziaren kawowca. ]

Znalazłem w internecie słówko suitably jako "należycie, np. przygotowany.", ale coś mi tu nie pasuje w tym kontekście, nie wiem dlaczego. Może zwykłe well-prepared byłoby najodpowiedniejsze?
https://www.diki.pl/slownik-angielskiego?q=suitably
well-prepared albo properly prepared
Wersja finalna. Coś dodać/ująć/zmienić?:)

How does coffee affect the human body?

We have been struggling with myths regarding coffee for hundreds of years, but nowadays we can avail ourselves of what scientific research has discovered. Scientists are trying to check whether coffee indeed affects the heart and causes insomnia, but they also are studying its relation to slimming.

Coffee is a drink made of properly prepared coffee beans from the Coffea plant. It originates from Ethiopia and when it reached Europe, dealers of other beverages immediately strived to destroy the competition and spread the most bizarre information about coffee. It was reported in the newspapers that coffee is not a decoction of overseas plants but a disgusting beverage made of smelly old shoes.

Research on the effects of coffee and tea on the human body was conducted a long time ago. Supposedly, King Gustav III of Sweden decided to personally verify the harmfulness of those drinks, but not on his own body. Twins sentenced to death were offered a mitigation of sentence to life imprisonment but in exchange, they were supposed to drink a few cups of beverage a day – one of them coffee, the other was tea. Besides this difference, they had the same, good living conditions. The aim of this experiment was to determine who will live longer and if they will die an antagonizing death. Years went by and the twins lived peacefully, albeit in confinement. The doctor who supervised the prisoners passed away, so did another one, eventually Gustav III of died too. And the twins lived on. The first twin died aged 83 – the one who drank the tea. As you can see, coffee neither kills nor contributes to premature death.

Coffee is neither good nor bad. Nowadays, it is known that the individual response to coffee is diverse, if only because everyone of us is different. Indeed, caffeine influences the release of stored body fat, but it will be helpful only under certain conditions. The body begins to burn about 13 per cent more calories just in 10 minutes after drinking coffee. But you need to move to do so. Even drinking a few dozen cups of coffee will have no effect, if you remain at rest.
np
appropriately prepared
I agreed more or less . I've got to say I kicked off my habit of drinking coffee on a regular basis .
What about Irish Coffee?
1. Coffee is a drink made of 'correctly' (wg mnie zle slowo) prepared coffee beans from the Coffea plant.
a slowo 'appropriately?' - zerknij do dobrego thesau.

2.Scientists are trying to check whether coffee indeed affects the heart and causes insomnia, but they are also studying its relation to slimming. ok
edytowany przez terri: 05 maj 2016
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