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I am a representative of a very well-know Japanese car concern – Toyota. Our concern has a long and wonderful history
I'm going to present our new car – Toyota
We worked for a long time and we have created a very good car.
At the beginning of the present qualities Toyota We have good qualities such as reliability, responsibility, innovation.
Innovation include a new on-board computer and a display that shows more the information and Toyota has a smoke and rain detector.
Our Toyota is reliable which confirmed many tests
In comparing to other cars our Toyota has unique points so as the elegance and the stylish illumination and a lot of new technologies.
In this part of my presentation, I’d like to talk about comfort and safety in Toyota. For us the comfort is important, so we have prepared specially armchairs are giving greater stability and comfort during the driving. We also prepared a lot of systems to improve safety.
We created an ergonomic steering wheels.
Protecting the environment is important, so we have prepared new types of eco-friendly engines

I am a representative of a very well-'know'(tu jest zle, slowo ma byc 'known, 'he is well-knowN) Japanese car 'concern' (nie za bardzo lubie to slowo tutaj, moze manufacturers, compan- cos takiego) – Toyota. Our concern has a long and 'wonderful history' (troche aside - ale sprawdz co oni wczesniej robili...takie slowa moga kogos obrazic)
I'm going to present our new car – Toyota (ale generalnie tutaj sie mowi Toyota Camy 2.5 lt - czy jakos)
We worked for a long time (ale gdzie? nad czym? tutaj trzeba napisac) and we have created a very good car.
At the beginning 'of the present' (tego calkowicie nie rozumiem) qualities Toyota. 'We' (to znaczy kto? nie jest tutaj jasno) have good qualities such as reliability, responsibility, innovation.
Innovation 'include' (innovation jest tutaj rzecz. 3os.l. poj i to wymaga odpowiedniego czasow.) a new on-board computer and a display that shows 'more the information' (tego nie rozumiem) and Toyota has a smoke and rain detector.
Our Toyota is reliable which 'confirmed many tests' (to jest zle, mozesz zrobic to biernie...many tests have confirmed, albo calkowicie inaczej. Staraj sie nie robic slowo w slowo z polskiego)
In 'comparing' (zla czesc mowy, tutaj rzeczownik) to other cars our Toyota has unique points 'so' (nie rozumiem uzycia tego slowa tutaj) as the elegance and the stylish illumination and 'a lot of' (w powaznych tekstach tego nie piszemy, to jest na nizszym poziomie, trzeba cos innego) new technologies.
In this part of my presentation, I’d like to talk about (brak przedimka) comfort and safety 'in' (zle slowo, tutaj OF) Toyota. For 'us' (nie jest jasno do kogo to sie odnosi) the comfort is important, so we have prepared 'specially' (zla czesc mowy) armchairs (brak slowa 'which') 'are' (niepotr) 'giving' (zle slowo, tutaj 'give') greater stability and comfort during 'the' (wg mnie niepotr) driving. We also prepared 'a lot of' (znowu to samo, prosze uzywac cos innego, bo to 'lot of' zawsze mi przypomina 'we have a lot of coconuts - poszukaj co to jest) systems to improve safety.
We created 'an' (nie jestem pewna czy ten przedimek cos tutaj dodaje) ergonomic steering wheels.
Protecting the environment is important, so we have 'prepared' (staraj sie nie uzywac tych samych slow caly czas, tutaj mozna 'created, constructed' - cost tkiego) new types of eco-friendly engines

Wielkie dzięki :)