CV - project engineer

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Czołem! Mam gorącą prośbę do znawców tematu o sprawdzenie mojego CV. Czy obowiązki w określonej firmie mają poprawną formę? Czy w ogóle CV ma poprawną formę?

Z góry dzięki za pomoc!

Na początku podaję: Date of birth; Address; Phone; E-mail

później..

I am eager to begin a career in technical industry as project engineer, process engineer or similar with opportunities for career growth and to use my skills in the best possible way for achieving the company's goals. I am good at problem solving and at the same time I get on with the team. I am highly focused with strong investigative skills, an analytical and logical approach to problem solving.

WORK EXPERIENCE
Investment Specialist, XYZ (Producer of juices and drinks); Duties:
• Planning and realization of investment budget
• Technical and financial analysis of quotations
• Preparation of technical, business, formal and commissioning documentation
• Keeping relationship with suppliers, developers, designers and partners
• Direct collaboration with Technical Director


Design engineer / technologist, XYZ (Producer of air heaters and infrared heaters); Duties:
• CNC machine programming
• Production planning
• Developing of technology by means of ERP software -
Stream Soft
• Preparation of technical documentation (SolidWorks, DraftSight)


Mechanical service consultant, XYZ (Authorized Dealer Toyota); Duties:
• Customer service
• Supervision of the service department
• Preparation of quotations
• Cooperation with mechanical engineers


EDUCATION
Faculty of Mechanical Engineering, XYZ University of Technology, MSc of Mechanical Engineering (part-time studies)

Faculty of Mechanical Engineering, XYZ University of Technology, Engineer of Mechatronics (full-time studies)


QUALIFICATION
Foreign languages:
English – Upper Intermediate (B2)
Russia – Beginer (A1)
Polish – native language


PLC programming Siemens S7 - the basics;
Machinery Directive 2006/42/EC – effective assessment of the conformity of machinery and equipment;
Driving licence – B category


Na zakończenie wymieniam kilka rzeczy w KEY SKILL
I am eager to begin a career in technical industry as (brak przedimka) project engineer, process engineer or similar with opportunities for career growth. (teraz drugie zdanie.) I wish to use...... and to use my skills in the best possible way for achieving the company's goals. I am good at problem solving (dowody, wpisz dlaczego tak myslisz) and at the same time I CAN get on with 'the' (zly porzedimek) team. I am highly focused with strong investigative skills, an analytical and logical approach to problem solving.

• Planning and realization of investment budget (tutaj mozesz npisac kwote)
• Keeping ( a good working) relationship with suppliers, developers, designers and partners
• Direct collaboration with (przedimek) Technical Director

Design engineer / technologist, XYZ (Producer of air heaters and 'infrared' (sprawdz ortog tego slowa) heaters); Duties:

• Customer service (including dealing with....)
• Preparation of quotations (do czego)
EDUCATION
Faculty of Mechanical Engineering, XYZ University of Technology, MSc of Mechanical Engineering (part-time studies) (po co piszesz ze studia byly part time - jak je skonczyles to do ch. jakie to ma znaczenie ?)
a po drugie to zle napisales. Najpierw osiagniety poziom MSc - wtedy ...reszta
Do tego podaj Uni i miejsce/kraj

Qualifications to nie znaczy jakoma jezykami wladasz/czy nie - ale twoje osiagniecia tutaj MSc....

Zrob to inaczej. Po wstepie, wtedy qualifications/studies a pozniej experience. Jezyki to dodaj jako 'Interests' na koncu.
Dzięki za pomoc!
jak je skonczyles to do ch. jakie to ma znaczenie ? what nas happened with your new year's resolution, miss 'grzeczna i z szacunkiem do drugiej osoby'? :-)
Nie zaczalbym CV od ....I'm f. EAGERRRRR!!!!!!!!
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RussiaN - BeginNer
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