I am eager to begin a career in technical industry as (brak przedimka) project engineer, process engineer or similar with opportunities for career growth. (teraz drugie zdanie.) I wish to use...... and to use my skills in the best possible way for achieving the company's goals. I am good at problem solving (dowody, wpisz dlaczego tak myslisz) and at the same time I CAN get on with 'the' (zly porzedimek) team. I am highly focused with strong investigative skills, an analytical and logical approach to problem solving.
• Planning and realization of investment budget (tutaj mozesz npisac kwote)
• Keeping ( a good working) relationship with suppliers, developers, designers and partners
• Direct collaboration with (przedimek) Technical Director
Design engineer / technologist, XYZ (Producer of air heaters and 'infrared' (sprawdz ortog tego slowa) heaters); Duties:
• Customer service (including dealing with....)
• Preparation of quotations (do czego)
EDUCATION
Faculty of Mechanical Engineering, XYZ University of Technology, MSc of Mechanical Engineering (part-time studies) (po co piszesz ze studia byly part time - jak je skonczyles to do ch. jakie to ma znaczenie ?)
a po drugie to zle napisales. Najpierw osiagniety poziom MSc - wtedy ...reszta
Do tego podaj Uni i miejsce/kraj
Qualifications to nie znaczy jakoma jezykami wladasz/czy nie - ale twoje osiagniecia tutaj MSc....
Zrob to inaczej. Po wstepie, wtedy qualifications/studies a pozniej experience. Jezyki to dodaj jako 'Interests' na koncu.