pomoc w pracy domowej

Hej Kochani, licze na pomoc w sprawdzeniu mojej malej czesci wymyslonej opowiesci po angielsku krolewnie sniezce, (kompletna porazka ze mnie ;( pomocy)
Prince has looked for Snow White since long time. He was very upset. He didn't know what was happen with her. Meanwhile dwarfs waited when their beautiful friend was recovered. They cried and sat around Snow White's bed. The evil queen was happy because she became the most beautiful women in the world again. One day when Prince walked in the forest he found a small house. He was curious of that place and he decided to check who lives there.

(brak przedimka) Prince 'has' (tutaj czas przeszly 'had') looked for Snow White 'since' (dalabym 'for a') long time.
He didn't know what 'was'(zle slowo, tutaj 'had') happenED with her. Meanwhile (pzedimek) dwarfs waited 'when' (cos mi tu nie pasuje, napisz gdzie oni czekali) their beautiful friend was 'recovered' (nie za bardzo, lepiej slowo 'found' znaleziona).
The evil queen was happy because she became the most beautiful 'women' (tutaj daj l. poj) in the world again. One day when (przedimek) Prince walked in the forest he found a small house. He was curious of that place and he decided to check who 'lives' (daj 'lived') there.

Tak, tak "naprowadzamy" :-)

No wlasnie Terri, tak poprawiac, to każdy potrafi.

terri, wielkie dzieki za pomoc i wyjasnienia ;)

wyjasnienia?