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Many persons say: „I never judge peope by appearance”, however if that’s truth? It turns out, that’s not at all. Each of us will see someone and judge them. We all immediately start to make assumptions for ourselves in our head’s. We will assign specific traits about that person with out knowing them. Is it normal?Of course! „Constraints of politeness”
People think, that form and opinion first and foremost based on appearance the person concerned is lack of propriety and respect. It is safer have not an opinion than have. Proceed in such a way, we avoiding criticism and staying neutral. That’s why, we prefer not admit to our own thoughts – even to ourselves. When someone say "I don’t judge by appearance", we have attitiude, accepted by society. We make impression people, whose are well-mannered. I don’t say that we aren’t like this for real. It is good we don’t want to hurt anyone. However, taking into consideration above examples, I think we shouldn’t say: "I don’t judge by appearance”, because then we feeding lies ourselves and it is not necessary.
„First impression”
First impression is very important. It is deciding, whether we will go on knowing the person concerned. However it must be remembered this is not the final sentence. Over time, our judgment will change. Although not always we will give it chance. Well, for example: when we see tattooed on whole body, cursing man, we will want immediately run away from him as far away. May it be, our impression was wrong? Perhaps, but I bet that we will finish our opinion only based by first impression.
„Stereotypes”
People in their early contacts are largely stereotyped. That is impossible to change. It is too much grounded in human consciousness. However we can try to combat them - at least these negative. Every human is different and we shouldn’t attribute him concrete traits, for example: by nationality or sex.
„Interest and likeness”
We won't be willing for devoting time to the person which won't interest us from the first contact as well as we will give the confidence to the person who will do it. It’s just who we are. But whether it is possible to determine who will interest us and who no? This is matter of argument. Some will want to get to know persons brought closer with appearance to oneself in order not to come off from the group. Other just the opposite - will be searching for people completely different from oneself in order to be in the focus of attention.Everything is a matter of the psyche. As same as judging by appearance - because seeing the given man, different persons will have other preliminary image about him. Because everyone we are different and we have other life experiences .
„So what conclusion...”
It is obvious, completely to get rid of the first impression won't give, but we should try to understand another person, not immediately judge him. It is obvious, completely to get rid of the first impression won't give, but we should try to understand another person, not immediately judge him. Let us try as far as possible to get to know other people because it can turn out that they are completely different than it seems to us

I never judge peope by appearance”, however if that’s truth? to jest błąd/niedokończone zdanie
tu też:
It turns out, that’s not at all.

We all immediately start to make assumptions for ourselves in our head’s ŹLE.
Ja bym dał albo jedno albo drugie ale nie oba:
for ourselves in our head’s.

Mała uwaga odnośnie cudzysłowów. Tylko ten jest poprawny:
When someone say "I don’t judge by appearance", we have attitiude

Many 'persons' (people) say: „I never judge 'peope' (ortog) by appearance”, however 'if' (to jest zle slowo?) that’s truth? It turns out, that’s not (wydaje mi sie ze tu brakuje slowa) at all.
We all immediately start to make assumptions for ourselves in our 'head’s' (pomysl co chesz napisac. Tutaj ma byc slowo w l. mnogiej) . We will assign specific traits about that person 'with out' (to piszemy razem) knowing them.
People think, that form and opinion first and foremost (tu cos brakuje) based on (brak slowa) appearance (brak slowa) the person concerned (dalabym slowo tutaj)is lack of propriety and respect. It is safer have not (tu brakuje 2 slowa) an opinion than (brak slowa) have (brak slowa) . Proceed in such a way, we 'avoiding' (zle slowo) criticism and staying neutral. That’s why, we prefer not (brak slowa) admit to our own thoughts – even to ourselves. When someone 'say' (someone to tutaj 3os.l.poj) "I don’t judge by appearance", we have (brak slowa) 'attitiude' (ortog), accepted by society. We make (brak slowa) impression (brak slowa) people, 'whose' (zle slowo) are well-mannered. I don’t say that we 'aren’t' (napisz to w calosci) like this for real. It is good (that) we don’t want to hurt anyone. However, taking into consideration (brak slowa) above examples, I think we shouldn’t say: "I don’t judge by appearance”, because then we (brak slowa) feeding lies (brak slowa) ourselves and it is not necessary.
„First impression”
It is deciding, whether we will go on (brak slowa) knowing the person concerned. However (przecinek) it must be remembered (that) this is not the final 'sentence' (calkowicie zle slowo).
Although not always we will give it (brak slowa) chance. 'Well' (calkowicie nie rozumiem uzycia tego slowa tutaj), for example: when we see 'tattooed' (tutaj jest potrzebny rzeczownik) on (brak slowa) whole body, cursing man, we will want (brak slowa) immediately run away from him as far away (tu brakuje 3 slowa) . May it be, (that) our impression was wrong? Perhaps, but I bet that we will finish our opinion only based 'by' (zle slowo) (brak 2 slowa) first impression.
„Stereotypes”
It is too 'much' (zle slowo, tutaj 'far') grounded in human consciousness. However (przecinek) we can try to combat them - at least these negative (ale co? brak reszty zdania).
„Interest and 'likeness' (co to za slowo? Czy ono istnieje w jez. ang?)”
We won't be willing 'for' (zle slowo) 'devoting' (zle slowo) time to the person 'which' (jak ludzie, to 'who') won't interest us from the first contact as well as we will give 'the confidence' (tego calkowicie nie rozumiem) to the person who will do it.
But whether it is possible to determine who will interest us and who 'no' (nie rozumiem co to znaczy, brakuje reszty zdania)?
Some will want to get to know persons brought closer 'with' (zle slowo) appearance to oneself in order not to 'come off' (tego calkowicie nie rozumiem) from the group. Other (ale co? trzeba napisac) just the opposite - will be searching for people completely different from oneself in order to be in the focus of attention.
'As' (niepotrzebne slowo) Same as judging by appearance - because seeing 'the' (zly przedimek) given man, different persons will have other preliminary image about him. 'Because' (nie zaczynaj zdan z tym slowem) everyone 'we are' (zle slowo, tutaj wystarczy 'is') different and we have 'other' (daj inne slowo) life experiences .
„'So what conclusion' (napisz to inaczej)...”
It is obvious, (brak 2 slowa) completely 'to' (niepotr slowo) get rid of the first impression 'won't give'(tego nie rozumiem), but we should try to understand another person, not immediately(brak slowa) judge him.

Thank you very much for help :)

'Because' (nie zaczynaj zdan z tym slowem) hmm?

Kiedy ja chodzilam do szkoly (w ostatnim millenium) tak sie uczylismy:
No statement begins with because because because is a conjunction.