Sprawdzenie czy dobrze jest napisane

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Sprawdzi ktoś czy jest dobrze
1 I work as a shop assistent. I like my job because I have contact with people and I can help in choice clothes
2 I work in city centre
3 I have this job 3 months
4 I start work at 6 am and finish at 14pm
5 My boss is women. I think that this this nice but too nervous
6 The advantages are : contact with people, help people when need my advice
7 The disadvantages are : too short breaks , clients do mess and I must every time put things on poles

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1 I work as a shop assistent. I like my job because I have contact with people and I can help THEM in choOSEice clothes
2 I work in city centre
3 I have this job 3 months. inny czas
4 I start work at 6 am and finish at 14pm
5 My boss is women. I think that this this nice but too nervous
6 The advantages are : contact with people, helpING people when need my advice
7 The disadvantages are : too short breaks , clients SPROBUJ INNE SŁOWO do mess and I must every time SZYK put things on poles NP 'RACKS/SHELVES'
edytowany przez Aaric: 05 lis 2017
W tym 3 zdaniu ma być present perfect ?
3 )I have had this job 3 months
5 )5 My boss is woman. I think that she is nice but too nervous
edytowany przez 12anka1234: 05 lis 2017
3 czas dobry, brak slowa przed 3
5 brak slowa przed woman
5) a woman
3 )I have had this job for 3 months
7 The disadvantages are : too short breaks , customers MAKE? mess and I every time must put things on shelves
edytowany przez 12anka1234: 05 lis 2017
make ok, przed mess przedimek
every time daj na koncu zdania
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A dlaczego w tym 6 ma być helpING?
help = pomóż
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