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Rewrite the following short extract to improve the style of writing. Join the sentences using non-defining relative clauses where suitable and other appropriate methods of linking.

"The bride was looking absolutely radiant. She was wearing a white silk dress. She was carrying a huge bouqet of white roses. Two small children were walking behind her. They were about five years old. They looked very sweet. They were wearing frilly, white dresses. They were carrying the train of the bride's dress. The bride's father was walking beside the bride. He was holding her arm. He was looking very proud. He turned to the guests and beamed."

The bride who was wearing a white silk dress and also carrying a huge bouqet of white roses was looking absolutely radiant. Two small children who were about five years old were walking behind her. They looked very sweet wearing frilly, white dresses and carrying the train of the bride's dress. The bride's father who was holding her arm was walking beside the bride. He was looking very proud as he turned to the guests and beamed.
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a gdzie przecinki? to mają byc non-defining relative clauses
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