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I was a little girl with blue eyes who
preferred silence than speaking
walked her fingers across the night sky
was looking for a four-leaf clover
caught the drops of rain to her lips
danced with the wind
had sheets of paper and coloured pencils as friends
all free time spent on drawing green meadows
wanted to become a painter
thought life is a fairy tale


I am a young woman with blue eyes who
lives in the countryside
walks among the trees or under the stars
is still looking for a child inside herself
collects moments not things
tries to catch uncatchable and forget unforgettable
finds answers to unanswerable
reads fairy tales between the lines of life
values love and freedom the most
listens to her heart
I was a little girl with blue eyes who
preferred silence 'than' (tutaj ja dalabym, 'to') speaking
...
(tutaj mi sie wydaje ze slowo 'with' by pasowalo) all free time spent on drawing green meadows

is still looking for 'a' (lepiej 'the') child inside herself
tries to catch (tutaj 'the') uncatchable and forget ('the') unforgettable
finds answers to (the) unanswerable
values love and freedom the most (ja dodalabym 'of all')