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Three days ago I came back from survival camp. I was in a jungle and I saw wild animals. I lived in shelter which I built alone. I learnt there different tips which helped me to survive in a jungle. First we had to find drinking water. We found out that the safest type of water to drink is rainwater. The best way to not sick is watching what the monkeys eat and copy them. Then we looked for something to eat. Finally we played hide-and-sick and we learnt to use compass. I encourage everyone to go on a camp. It's a great fun. I'll give you the most important advice to survive such camp. You should be all the time with your group and you should pay attention to not get lost.

A good way to do not have problems with homework is listening to the teacher on lessons.
You should do your homework at home and don't do it at school.
If you don't understand something on the lesson, ask your teacher about it.
You can also look for help from your friends.
If you do your homework on Friday, you will have a weekend off.
The best way to not sick is watching what the monkeys eat and copy them. brak czasownika
Finally we played hide-and-sick and we learnt to use compass. nie ma takiej zabawy
I encourage everyone to go on a camp. Po polsku mówimy np na obóz, na plaże ale nie po ang.
A good way to do not have problems with homework is listening to the teacher on lessons. pomyśl nad pierwszą połową zdania
edytowany przez Aaric: 17 mar 2019
You should do your homework at home and don't do it at school. ja bym dał 'You should do your homework at home, not at school.
Sprawdź czy można dodać kilka przedimków.
edytowany przez Aaric: 17 mar 2019
Zdania poprawiłam dużymi literami. Czy o to chodziło?
1. The best way to not sick is watching what the monkeys eat and COPYING them.
2.Finally we played hide-and-SEEK and we learnt to use compass.
3.I encourage everyone to go TO a camp.
4. Listening to the teacher on lessons is a good way to NOT HAVE problems with homework.
5. You should do your homework at home, not at school.
Cytat:
The best way to not sick is watching what the monkeys eat and COPYING them
not to get ...:)))
edytowany przez Robbertoxx: 17 mar 2019
4. tak jak wcześniej nie mogło być NA obóz, nie może być NA lekcjach.
1.The best way to not to get is watching what the monkeys eat and copying them. ?
Wciąż nie tak.
4. Listening to the teacher AT lessons is a good way to not have problems with homework. ?
Grrrrr ;-))
Poddaje się :(
Jak będzie negative of 'to get'?
Watching what the monkeys eat and copying them is the best way to not get. ?
4. np Listening to the lessons
Przecież Robert ci podał ;))
Brakuje sick.
Ok:) Czy teraz te i pozostałe są już ok?
Watching what the monkeys eat and copying them is the best way to not get sick.

Listening to the lessons is a good way to not have problems with homework.
Cytat:
to not have problems
??
edytowany przez Robbertoxx: 17 mar 2019
Nie wiem czy jest tak w BrE ale u nas mówimy 'best way NOT TO get sick.
Również w ostatnim zdaniu pierwszego paragrafu.
edytowany przez Aaric: 17 mar 2019
Cytat:
Nie wiem czy jest tak w BrE ale u nas mówimy 'best way NOT TO get sick.
Również w ostatnim zdaniu pierwszego paragrafu.
raczej tak ;)
edytowany przez Robbertoxx: 17 mar 2019
Chodzi o ,,to not have any problems"?
Chodzi o ,,to not have any problems"? mnie też o to biega ;-))
Czy teraz jest już ok?

Three days ago I came back from survival camp. I was in a jungle and I saw wild animals. I lived in a shelter which I built alone. I learnt there different tips which helped me to survive in a jungle. First we had to find drinking water. We found out that the safest type of water to drink is rainwater. The best way to not get sick is watching what the monkeys eat and copying them. Then we looked for something to eat. Finally we played hide-and-seek and we learnt to use a compass. I encourage everyone to go to a camp. It's a great fun. I'll give you the most important advice to survive such camp. You should be all the time with your group and you should pay attention to not get lost.

A good way to not have any problems with homework is listening to the lessons.
You should do your homework at home, not at school.
If you don't understand something the lesson, ask your teacher about it.
You can also look for help from your friends.
If you do your homework on Friday, you will have a weekend off.
edytowany przez Karolinaa01: 17 mar 2019
A good way to not have any problems... This is still my sticking point.
Ja bym zgubił TYPE OF water.
Przedimek przed survival camp.
Możliwość innych błędów ;-))
edytowany przez Aaric: 17 mar 2019
Cytat:
If you don't understand something the lesson
po something cos bym dodał ..
edytowany przez Robbertoxx: 18 mar 2019
HOW to use of ...
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