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Hi Dave !
Thanks for your email. I think you’ll have lots of fun at the wedding. I know that you are very excited because you’ve never been to a Polish marriage ceremony before !
I’ve got some advice for you. First of all, I think you should go out and buy new clothes. I suggest to visit the shop that you showed me during my last visit to England and buy an elegant white shirt and black trousers. If you want to look smartly don’t forget about a tie or a bow tie.
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By the way, don’t forget to buy them a wedding present. It can be something practical. If I were you, I’d buy a set of new pots or knives. Greeting cards are welcome too. I hope to hear from you soon !
Take care,
XYZ

Hi Dave !
Thanks for your email. I think you’ll have lots of fun at the wedding. I know you are very excited because you’ve never been to a Polish event like that before!
I’ve got some advice for you. First of all, I think you should go out and buy new clothes. I suggest that you wear a white shirt and black trousers. If you want to look smart, don’t forget about a tie.
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By the way, remember to give them a wedding present. It can be something practical. If I were you, I’d buy a set of new pots. I hope to hear from you soon!
Take care,
XYZ

The most welcome and most common wedding gift nowadays is money, not pots.


If you don't mind, I’ve got some advice for you. There is a dress code for Polish weddings, so I suggest that you wear a suit and a tie because casual attire is frowned upon at such events..