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Dear Kate and Mark,

I’m sorry I haven’t written for so long. I was very busy, because I had a lot of exam.
I wont tell you about speech about healthy manner of rultrition. This speech leading by university professor Alice Fisk from Warsaw.
Metting to do in last week on Monday. On gym in my school.
Alice Fisk told about cut down on fatty food. She told too about drink water. Every day people should drink about two litre of water. Professor Fisk told too about sweets and vegetables. Every think should eat the least sweets, but the most vegetables.
I think that all hint professor Alice Fisk is very helpful for many people. I to decide to do every day drink two litre of water and too eat the least sweets.

All the best,

XYZ

A to jego temat:
Byłaś ostatnio na pogadance na temat sposobu zdrowego odżywiania się. W liście do znajomych napisz:
-o czym była pogadanka i kto ją prowadził;
-kiedy i gdzie odbyła się pogadanka;
-jakich wskazówek udzielała osoba prowadząca;
-co sądzisz o tych wskazówkach i czy masz zamiar którąś z nich zastosować.


z góry dziękuję:)
*a lot of exams a nie exam
*I want to tell you
*speech concerning (zamiast about zeby znow nie powtarzac)
*nutrition a nie ru... :P
*this speech was led by an university ....
*This meeting took place last week on Monday on the gym in my school.
*Alice ... told us about replacing fatty food with something healthy (lepiej brzmi :P )
*She encouraged us to drink about 2 litres of water (a zdanie She told too about
>drink water wykresl)
* Prof.... mentioned also something about sweets and vegetables. Everyone should eat as much vegetables as it is possible and restrict eating sweets
* I think that all hints proff A.F. gave us are really helpful not only for me but for many people.
*She is the person because of whom I decided to drink 2 litres of water every day and definitely limit eating sweets.


przepraszam za tyle zmian ale uwazam ze sa dobre :P
wielkie dzięki za pomoc:)

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