sprawdzenie krótkiego wypracowania o McDonald`s

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In my opinion one of the most popular business in my country is McDonald`s. It is the world`s largest chain of fast-food restaurants. McDonald`s selling hamburgers, chicken, french fries, milkshakes and soft drings. The business began in 1940 with a restaurant opend by Dick and Mac McDonald in California. The restaurant are found in 120 countries and territories around the world. In Polad we have about 200 McDonald`s restaurants. The revenue is about 15 (chodzi o miliardy - nie wiem jak napoisać) USD and have over 5[tel]employees. Company became a symbol of globalization and the spred of the American way of life. McDonald`s restaurant have many enemy. They say that it served unhealthy food. However, it doesn`t change the fact, that McDonald`s have nearly 54 million customers each day.

In my opinion one of the most popular businessES in my country is McDonald`s.

McDonald`s selling (lepiej: SELLS) ... and soft drinKs.

openEd by Dick and Mac McDonald

The restaurantS are found

The revenue is about 15 (chodzi o miliardy - nie wiem jak napoisać) BILLION USD

THE company became (HAS BECOME) a symbol of globalization and the spreAd (lepiej: POPULARITY) of the American way of life.

McDonald`s restaurantS have many enemIES. They say that it serveS unhealthy food. However, it doesn`t change the fact (bez przecinka) that McDonald`s have nearly 54 million customers each day.

Temat listu jest taki, zeby napisac do pen-friend'a z USA o swoim kraju : zakupy, TV, jedzenie itd.

Dear Claudia,
Thanks for your letter. It was nice to hear from you. I'm sorry I haven't answered earlier but I was really busy with my school.
Anyway, you asked me about life on my country. So I think it's pretty dull but undoubtedly Poland can also praise some things.
I'm sure our food is less fat than yours and what's more, it is very tasty! Just look at people living in your country. I don't have you in mind but the majority of them are extremely padded, aren't they? So if your friend complains about overweight, suggest her to visit Poland.
As for TV - it's quite good. Maybe there aren't thousands of channels but you can find some interesing soap opera or film.
I'm always sounding off about Polish entertainment! Rarely you can meet somebody out by nigdht. Discos and pubs are opened from 9 to 2 p.m. It's somenting unthinkable! After all, life starts after midnight!
Recently, Poland invests in department stores. Therefore shopping is more pleasant and available. There are many foreign shops and you can fell like a star trying on all this clothes!
Poland is fantastic for sightseeing. We have a lot of remarkable places where you may see many magnificient monuments. Particularly, I recommend you to visit Cracow and Warsaw.
Anyway, there's lots more to write about Poland but it is necessary to see it to feel climate of this East country.
That's all for now. Write soon.

Love,
Annie

Proszę o poprawę. Przecinki też. :(