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List.

I am sorry it has taken so long to write back to you but I have not got much time for myself. I work everyday and study at the weekend.
I would like to tell toy something about Rick. I met him at the party at my friend three months ago. Anna introduced me him. We were speaking a lot of and dancing.
Rick is at the same age as me. He is tall, well-build and handsome. He has short hair and suntanned complexion. He is intelligent, trustworthy and friendly. Rick is my boyfriend.
We have a many plans on future. We want to buy a flat and to settle together.


Ogłoszenie - I will sell a bicycle.

I want to sell my bicycle, because I leave form England.
A bicycle is in kelter. Last year I bought him and I went by bicycle on my class.
A price of bicycle is 50 pounds.
If you want to loo at bicycle you can come a Green street in the centre of London.

Z góry dziękuję!!! :)

>I am sorry it has taken so long to write back to you but I have not
>got much time for myself. I work everyday and study at WEEKENDS.
>I would like to tell YOU something about Rick. I met him at the party
>at my friend'S three months ago. Anna introduced HIM TO ME. We were
>TALKING a lot and dancing.
>Rick is the same age as me. He is tall, well-build and handsome. He
>has short hair and suntanned complexion. He is intelligent,
>trustworthy and friendly. Rick is my boyfriend.
>We have a many plans FOR THE future. We want to buy a flat and to settle DOWN
>together.
>
>
>Ogłoszenie - I will sell a bicycle.
>
>I want to sell my bicycle, because I leave FOR England.
>A bicycle is in kelter (???). Last year I bought IT and I went by bicycle
>on my class (???).
>THE price of bicycle is 50 pounds.
>If you want to looK at THE bicycle you can come a Green street in the
>centre of London.

RoxTon bardzo dziękuję!! :)

A bicycle is in kelter - rower jest w dobrym stanie
jak to napisac inaczej? może... A bicycle is useful?

on my class (???)---- na moje lekcje, zajęcia ( na studiach)

study at WEEKENDS - chodzi mi o studniowanie w weekend (sobota i niedziela)

>A bicycle is in kelter - rower jest w dobrym stanie

the bicycle is in good working condition


>on my class (???)- (to commute) to school/university/college/classes and back

>study at WEEKENDS ---> niejednorazowy, konkretny weekend, ale kilka

My bf is WELL-BUILT
We have many pplans for the future (bez a, przed l.mn. nie staiwamy a)

He has A suntanned complexion

Tytul ogloszenia raczej - A bicycle for sale

the price of THE bicycle

Dziękuję jeszcze raz :)