Dear Sirs!
(Listu motiw - nie zaczyna sie tak...lepiej I wish to apply for the position of ....advertised in...)
According to your advertisement I found in ... I want to offer myself
for the position of ...
'i' ('I'piszemy duza litera i to zawsze) 'am sure' (to wyglada troszeczke za pewnie, lepiej I feel that...) my experience and education will be of great value for your company (tutaj trzeba dodac because......)
I speak and write 'good english' (nie, good english to jest kolok. lepiej - english at an advanced level eg CPE) and my working knowledge of MSO is 'really high' (co to znaczy?).
I am eager to work and learn new things. I am very responsible, punctual and AN open-minded person.
I think (that?) THIS new job will let me improve abilities and skills THAT I
have. (It wil be great pleasure to introduce myself during the interview)-nie, lepiej I wam available for an interview at any time)
'With thanks' (nie, jak juz to Many thanks...) for your time 'I am waiting for contact' (to dla mnie wyglada niegrzecznie) My cell-phone...