prosiłbym o zerknięcie czy nie ma błędów

complaint letter (proszę tylko o sprawdzenie błędów)


Dear Mr John
I'm writing to complain about a cassette player I bought from your shop last Monday. I am dissatified because this player does not work properly.
I put inside new batteries, but it exhaust quickly.
In addition, sometime without the cause player switched off oneself.
I pay for that a lat of money, but this product doesn't satisfy my require. Seems do that possesses the technical defect.
I sent cassette player back to your shop, but I didn't have any answer jet. I want to exchange this product to new one. I hope you will deal with this metter.

Your sincerely XYZ

Dear Mr John (JOHN jest tu imieniem czy nazwiskiem? Bo po MR powinno byc nazwisko)

I'm (Lepiej I AM) writing to complain about a cassette player I bought from your shop last Monday. I am dissatified because this player does not work properly.
I put new batteries INSIDE, but it (THEY) exhaust (RAN OUT) quickly.
In addition, sometimeS THE player switched ITSELF off FOR NO REASON.
I pay (zaplacilem - I PAID) a LOT of money FOR THIS PRODUCT, but IT doesn't (Lepiej: DOES NOT) satisfy my require (to czasownik. Powinno byc: REQUIREMENTS). IT seems TO possesses A technical defect.
I sent THE cassette player back to your shop, but I didn't have (TU: HAVE NOT HAD) any answer jet (YET). I want to exchange this product to (FOR) A new one. I hope you will deal with this metter (MATTER).

Your sincerely XYZ

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