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Dear class of the future.

In the year 2007 very fashionable are Mp3 and Mp4. In school on playtime a lots of students listen favourite music.
Everyone have a mobiles. They're very small, so they're sequester in a little place. We can listen music from they, take a photos, turn movies and other. And call, of course.
Trendy is a emo style. It rely on listen characteristic music and strange outlook: striped t-shirts, norrow trousers and sneaks. For me it is funny, because every emoboy and emogirl will be get dressed similar clothes. I don't like when people look identical.
Youth often use a Internet. They have a myspace.com ( It is a most popular page on the worl, where people can add us photos, write about us, meet people forum other country etc.), blogs and photoblogs. It is a good way on meet new, interesting people.
On September we will going to wear a uniform. I not want it. This is a stupid way, because half of youth don't like when everybody wear identical clothes.

Yours,
Class 2, 2007

In the year 2007 'very fashionable are Mp3 and Mp4' (zla kolejnosc slow). In school 'on' (nie on a during) playtime (tutaj cos brakuje) 'a' (a jest niepotr) lots of students (tutaj cos brakuje) listen TO THEIR favourite music.
Everyone 'have' HAS a 'mobiles' (mobile phone, mobiles to tez znaczy wiszace zabawki dla dzieci) They're very small, so they're 'sequester' (zle slowo) in a
'little'? place. We can listen TO music from 'they' (nie they - sprawdz), take 'a' (jak a to photo l.poj a jak chcesz l. mnoga to photos ale bez 'a') photos, 'turn movies' (nie rozumiem tego) and 'other' (to znaczy co jeszcze). And MAKE A call, of course.
'Trendy is a emo style' (zla kolejnosc slow). It relIES on listenING TO characteristic music and A strange outlook: striped t-shirts, nA0rrow trousers and sneakERs. For me it is funny, because every emoboy and emogirl w'ill be get' (mozna is dressed in) similar clothes. I don't like IT when people look identical.
Youth often use THE Internet. They have a myspace.com (It is a most
popular page IN the worlD, where people can add 'us'(czy masz na mysli their?) photos, write about 'us' (themselves?), 'meet people forum other country' (to nie jest jasne-zmien kol. slow) etc.), blogs and photoblogs. It is
a good way TO meet new, interesting people.
IN September we 'will' (niepotr) ARE going to wear SCHOOL uniform. I not want it. This is a stupid way, because half of 'youth' (moze lepiej young people) don't like IT when everybody wearS identical clothes. (p.s. chyba nie przeszlo -sprawdz, to znaczy ze 'no' to school uniforms)

In the year 2007 very POPULAR are Mp3 and Mp4 PLAYERS. In school DURING
>playtime a lots of students listen TO favourite music.
>Everyone haS a CELL PHONES. THOSE very small, so they TAKE a
>little SPACE. We can listen TO music ON THEM, take a photos, PLAY
>movies and other. And MAKE A CALL, of course.
>EMO STYLE IS TRENDY (co to jest to emo??). It IS ABOUT LISTENING TO DISTINCTIVE music and HAVING
>strange APPEARANCE: striped t-shirts, norrow trousers and sneaks. For me
>it is funny, because every emoboy and emogirl PUT ON
>similar clothes. I don't like IT when people look identical.
>Youth often use a Internet. They USE a myspace.com ( It is a most
>popular SITE on the INTERNET, where people can add THEIR photos, write about
>THEM, meet people from other country etc.), blogs and photoblogs. It is
>a good way TO meet new, interesting people.
>SINCE September we ARE going to wear a uniformS. I DONT WANT TO DO THAT. This is a
>stupid THING, because MOST of youth don't like when everybody wearS
>identical clothes.

"where people can add 'us'(czy masz na mysli their?) photos, write about 'us' (themselves?)"

- Gdzie ludzie mogą dodawać SWOJE zdjęcia, pisać o SOBIE.

Wiem, że przekręciłam to zdanie, ale nie potrafiłam inaczej. ^^
Ale wielkie dzięki za sprawdzenie.

Redneck, ( btw., świetny nick xD ) o emo moższ poczytać na wikipedi, chociaż jak zwykle podają tylko pół-prawde:

http://pl.wikipedia.org/wiki/Emo

Wielkie dzięki za sprawdzenie. :)

where people can add their photos, write about themselves
tzn...gdzie ludzie mogą dodawać swoje zdjęcia, pisać o sobie.