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How i Made my first million ?

I`m a common woman. In my life i have many jobs. I was salesman in supermarket, gardener, taxi driver and charwoman. I often went to interview and often heard "We call you".
One day I have very important meeting, I was in high spirits. I wore my best clothes so that I want had this job. When I went in to office I met a men who told me about my allowance and my obligations. The rest of day was horrible. I commited a blunder. The men who employed me
in the morning, laid off me in the evening. I was crossed with him. When I back to home, I must looked miserable, because the old women said "I have specially for you some cake with augury, buy it and smile !". I bought it and my prediction read "Look on the bright site of life. Your dreams come true !". ...Sure. But I ventured and I bought fate. The chances of win was minimal.
I opened my fate and ...nothing. This old women lie ! I lost temper ..but I retried and this fate was lucky ! I won one milion dollars ! It astonishing my ! I always have losing streak ! When I sought this old women who sold my this cake, but anybody knows her...
I think she was palmist.

I chciałam się jeszcze spytać o zadanie Purpose and Result
Jesli chciałabym napisac zdanie, czy jest to poprawne ?
Mam pieniądze, dzięki nim pomagam nieszczęśliwym osobom.
I have money so unlucky that people can i help.

Mam podły charakter, dlatego też trudno mi utrzymać dobrą pracę
I have wicked character so good that often I was sacked.
Mogłabym prosić o sprawdzenie ?
To dla mnie bardzo ważne !
How 'i' ('I' piszemy duza litera) made my first million ?
I`m aN 'common' (lepiej 'ordinary', slowo common ma calkowicie inne konotacje w ang) woman. In my life I have HAD many jobs. I was A 'salesman' (salesman nie moglas byc, bo to jest slowo na mezczyzne, lepiej salesWOMAN) IN A supermarket, gardener, taxi driver and 'charwoman' (lepiej cleaner') I often went to interviewS and 'often' (niepotr drugi raz often) heard '"We call you".' (nie, co slyszalas to we'LL call you)
One day I HAD (bo opowiadasz o przeszlosci)A very important meeting, I was in high spirits. I wore my best clothes I 'want had' (want had nie istnije po ang - co masz na mysli, to powiedziec...because I really wanted) this job. When I went inTO THE office I met a 'men' (czy masz na mysli jednego, czy wiecej, jak jeden to MAN, jak wiecej to MEN) who told me about my 'allowance' (w pracy mowimy o salaries) and my obligations. I commited a blunder. The mAn who employed me...
When I WENT back 'to' (bez 'to') home, I must HAVE looked miserable, because the 'old women' (jakie old women?) said "I have specially for you some cake with augury (nieznam tego slowa), buy it and smile !". I bought it and my prediction read "Look on the bright siDe of life. Your dreams MAY come true !". ...Sure. But I ventured and I bought fate. The chances of A win WERE minimal. I opened my fate and ...nothing. This old 'women' (women to l. mnoga, a 'this' to l. poj - albo jedno albo drugie) lieD ! I lost MY temper
.but I 'retried' (lepiej tried again) and this TIME, MY fate was lucky ! I won one milLion dollars !
It astonishED mE ! I HAVE always HAD (bo czas przeszly) A losing streak ! When I Bought this THE old womAn who sold my this cake, but EVERYbody knows her...(to zdanie niema sensu - popraw) I think she was A palmist.
I chciałam się jeszcze spytać o zadanie Purpose and Result
I have money so I HELP unlucky people.
I have A wicked character 'so good' (to nie znaczy dobra prace) that (albo 'I OFTEN GET sacked' albo 'I have difficulty keeping a good job').
Dziękuje terii, fajnie, że objaśniłaś mi moje błędy - dzięki temu moge się douczyć !
Mam pytania

znalazłam słowo augury jako wróżba, jakim innym słowem lepiej je zastąpić ? lepiej np fortune-telling ??

When I Bought this THE old womAn who sold my this cake, but EVERYbody knows her.. - chodziło mi o to, że jak wygrałam to chciałam wrócić do tej kobiety która sprzedała mi ciastko, ale nikt jej nie znał
czy w takim razie może być

When I won, I wanted back to the old woman who sold my this cake, but nobody knows her ...

I chciałam jeszcze spytać o to zdanie :
I have a million dollars, but I`m the same woman. Money don`t change me.
augury - teraz to slowo znalazlam w moim slowniku - ale to nie za bardzo pasuje, chociaz to jest 'soothsayer' (fortune teller) -
... When I won, I wanted to return to the old womAn who had sold me the cake, (chyba fortune cookies) but no one knew her.
I NOW have a million dollars, but I'm STILL the same woman I was. Money hasn't changed me.
Dzięki !
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