Proszę o sprawdzenie i poprawki :)))

Temat przeniesiony do archwium.
I am writing to complain about the CD - player which I bought in your shop two days ago.
Soon after I brought in home switched anit stopped working all together.
It still does not work as the CD does not move and there is no sound.
I must admit that I am very disappointed with the quality of products of fered on sale in your shop.
[jeszcze nie wiem jak napisac, ze nie ja spowodowałam uszkodzenie i to wszystko.]