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Chcesz spędzić z rodziną wakacje w Szkocji. Znajomy/Znajoma polecił/-a Ci hotel w Aberdeen. Napisz list do kierownika hotelu z prośbą o rezerwację.
• Podaj dokładną datę przyjazdu i długość pobytu;
• Napisz, dla ilu osób dorosłych i dzieci chcesz zarezerwować miejsca;
• Napisz, jaki pokój/ pokoje i ile posiłków dziennie sobie życzysz;
• Zapytaj, jaką kwotę pieniędzy musisz wpłacić z góry i poproś o odpowiedź z potwierdzeniem rezerwacji.

Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to request about reservation. My familiar recommend me yours hotel and I would like to come to Aberdeen.
I come to Aberdeen first July this year and I would like to be there two weeks.
I would like to book two rooms. One for me and my wife and second for my three children. I would like two big rooms, for me and my wife with one big bed and with bathroom and TV please and for children with three single beds and with bathroom too.
I would like breakfast with coffee and tea and juicy, two hot meals with juicy on dinner and supper too with tea and coffee. We are not vegetarians and we can eat everything.
Must I pay at once all amount? And if yes how much money I must pay ?
I look forward to hearing from you soon and acknowledgement of my letter.

Yours faithfully,

XYZ

Pomoze ktoś ? Proszę.

Nie pomoże nikt?? Proszę!

I jeszcze coś jak ktoś by mógł !!

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Chcesz spędzić z rodziną wakacje w Szkocji. Znajomy/Znajoma polecił/-a Ci hotel w Aberdeen. Napisz list do kierownika hotelu z prośbą o rezerwację.
• Podaj dokładną datę przyjazdu i długość pobytu;
• Napisz, dla ilu osób dorosłych i dzieci chcesz zarezerwować miejsca;
• Napisz, jaki pokój/ pokoje i ile posiłków dziennie sobie życzysz;
• Zapytaj, jaką kwotę pieniędzy musisz wpłacić z góry i poproś o odpowiedź z potwierdzeniem rezerwacji.

Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to request about reservation. My familiar recommend me yours hotel and I would like to come to Aberdeen.
I come to Aberdeen first July this year and I would like to be there two weeks.
I would like to book two rooms. One for me and my wife and second for my three children. I would like two big rooms, for me and my wife with one big bed and with bathroom and TV please and for children with three single beds and with bathroom too.
I would like breakfast with coffee and tea and juicy, two hot meals with juicy on dinner and supper too with tea and coffee. We are not vegetarians and we can eat everything.
Must I pay at once all amount? And if yes how much money I must pay ?
I look forward to hearing from you soon and acknowledgement of my letter.

Yours faithfully,

XYZ

I am writing to 'request about reservation' (nie, piszesz zeby zrobic,- enquire about A reservation.)
My 'familiar' (sprawdz co to slowo znaczy, wiem, ze nie to masz na mysli) recommendED 'yours' (YOUR) hotel TO ME and I would like to come to Aberdeen.
I come (nie, I AM COMING) to Aberdeen ON THE first OF July this year and I would like to be there FOR two weeks.
...with coffee and tea and 'juicy' (chyba JUICE), two hot meals with juicE FOR dinner and supper too with tea and coffee. We are not vegetarians and we can eat 'everything' (lepiej anything).
Must I pay 'at once all amount' (zla kol slow - the whole amount at once?)
'And if yes' (Nie, napisz 'If so'), how much money DO I NEED TO pay ?
I look forward to hearing from you soon with AN acknowledgement of my letter.