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I wish I had thought twice before I did it. Last summer I was on holiday in Zakopane. One day I decided to go to the mountains. The weater was fine, and temperature was about 25 degrees. Just after a dinner I went, wore only in shirt without any jacket. Firstly there was astonished. Green trees and fresh air that was that I really needed. After about 4 hours I was a little tired, so I decided to turn back and went to the hotel. During walk I noticed a track which was towards Zakopane. Without much hestitaing I turned in hope to approach faster my destination.
At the begining I little confused because there were not any signs which are usually on turist track. I was walking throught forrest deeper and deeper when weather started changing. Big, blacks clouds appeared. It was going to rain. The other not good thing was that it was going dark. After about an hour I had decided to turn back again because I had not met anybody on this track. It started raining and temperature beneath to about 10 deegres. After a while it was dark. I started worrying about myself. Finally I decided to call for a help. I had called to TOPR and said them where I supposed to be. Nice women ensured me that everything will be fine and pleased me to do not move.
It took them about an hour to found me. I was really frozen and scared. Luckily after an hour I was lieing in bed in my hotel.

The 'weater' (ortog) was fine, and temperature was 'about' (nie lepiej approx. 25 degrees (tutaj trzeba dodac C). 'Just after 'a' (bez 'a') dinner I went' (zmien kol slow I went just after my dinner..), 'wore' (WEARING) only 'A' shirt AND without 'any' 'A' jacket.
*Firstly 'there' (zle slowo) (tutaj potrseba the view) was 'astonished' (astonishing).
*Green trees and fresh air that was that I really needed (zmien kol. slow - I really needed...). After 'about' (mozna nearly) 4 hours I was a little tired, so I decided to turn back and 'went' (return) to the hotel. During THE walk I noticed a track which 'was' (WENT) towards Zakopane. Without much 'hestitaing' (hesitation) I turned in hope 'to approach' (of approaching) 'faster my destination' (my destination faster.).
At the begining I WAS A little confused because there were 'not' (NO) signs
which are usually THERE on A 'turist' (ortog) track. I was walking 'throught' (ortog) THE forest deeper and deeper when THE weather started changing. Big, blacK clouds appeared (from out of nowhere).
The other 'not good thing' (no, thing which was also not good) was that it
was going dark. After 'about' (niepotr) an hour I 'had' (niepotr) decided to turn back again because I had not met anybody on this track. It started raining and THE temperature 'beneath' (zle slowo - dropped down) to 'about' (za duzo razy uzywasz to 'about' moze approx, nearly) 10 deegres.
I started 'worrying' (TO WORRY) about myself. Finally I decided to call for 'a' (bez 'a') help. I had called to 'TOPR' (tak, ale TOPR to po polsku - znajdz odp. ang) and 'said TO them where I supposed to be' (moze gave them my location). 'Nice women' (czy sa jakies, ktore sa nie nice? lepiej A lady assured me) 'ensured' Assured) me that everything 'will be' (would be) fine and 'pleased me' (nie, asked me, told me not to move) to do not move.
It took them about an hour to 'found' (FIND) me.
I was 'recovering in the safety of my hotel room')