rozprawka / traditional school

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Task: Napisz rozprawkę pod tytułem “Will traditional school service its purpose in the future?”

Nowadays, school is a place where young people achieve knowledge and where their character is form by peer groups and teachers. But is not it stuffy and old hat in our modern computer society? Will traditional school serve its purpose in the future?

From a social standpoint, in school we discover which behavior is good and which is bad. We can make a new friendships and it is very important in societal live. Going to school develop getting in touch skills, make us more open and brave in interpersonal contacts. If we want to have a good health we should save traditional school and encourage it.

From an economic and a scientific viewpoint, traditional school belong to past. Statistics shows that number of those who do not go to school but study hard at home using Internet increased rapidly in a past few years. Access to the Internet guarantee great possibilities of widening knowledge but do we really would not have any contacts with other people? Is isolation good way to learn about world?

All that proves that although for many people traditional school do not mean the best way of getting knowledge it seems that it will still serve its purpose because people need steady contact with others and teachers need job.


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Task: Napisz rozprawkę pod tytułem “Will traditional school
service? (czy nie serve?) its purpose in the future?"

...and where their character is formED by peer groups and teachers.
But is 'not it stuffy' (that not stuffy) and old hat in our modern computer society?
From a social standpoint, in school we discover which behavioUr (po AmE behavior) is good and which is bad. We can make 'a' ('a' niepotz) new friendships and 'it' (lepiej THIS) is very important in societal 'live' (live-to jest czasownik, tutaj masz na mysli rzeczownik 'LIFE', l.mn liVES). Going to school developS 'getting in touch' (contact?) skills, makeS us more open and brave in interpersonal contacts. If we want to have 'a' (niepotr) good 'health'? we should save THE traditional school and encourage 'it' (it - to znaczy ..it's existence?) .

...traditional school belongS TO to past. Statistics shows that A LARGE number of those who do not go to school but study hard at home using Internet HAS increased rapidly in 'a' THE past few years. Access to the Internet guaranteeS great possibilities of widening knowledge, but 'do we really' (nie rozumiem tego tutaj) THEN WE would not have any contacts with other people. Is isolation 'A' good way to learn about THE world?

All that proves IS that although for many people traditional schoolS do
not mean the best way of getting knowledge it seems that 'it' A TRADITIONAL SCHOOL will still serve its purpose because people need 'A' steady contact with others and teachers need 'A' job.
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