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This material contains 5 pictures and 2headlines. In the 2 pictures of all we can see rather unpleasant situations. In the first we cen see prpably mother with her child who is crying an is sad. A child's head is being lain by child on her's mother knees. A women is stroiking child's head and she's trying hard to know what's the reason that her daughter feel bad. I'm sure that she's using tender words to understand daughter's problems. Finally child will open heart to her's mother. Conversation is needed by everybody when they've got bad mood. Pierre Corneille said that when we were talking abot our sufferings we often eased ( łagodzimy ) them. I think this quotation is confirmed by another picture in which we can see alone and disheartned women. She hasn'y got nobody to talk about her sorrow. She can't listen to someones" consolation or advice. Maybe if she had known someone helpful she wouldn"t have concerned alone at home. We feel also need to share our hapiness with another people. So we often want to talk about this special with close friens or some member of our family. It shows very good next two picture among all. In the one of them we can see two ypung women in the restaurant. They;re smiling, giglessing and goissiping about something nice. They are acguainted very well and they trust to each other. In the secong photo we cen see two families ot one big. They are spending time together on the picnic. They at rested. They are joking and talking baout something pleasant. There are plenty of laugh and hapiness> In the all cases I was talking about people use informal language and they are rather stress out. They are also wearing casula clothes and they are outdoor or at home>
Whereas in the last picture we can see people who are wearing smart. They are in the office. There are tense atmosphere. Formal language is being used by them. They are keeping one another on a distance. Propbably they'll have to come to an agreement ang they;ll want to sign a contract. SO they're trying persuade one another to their reason by relevant arugemnts. During conversation we can express our opinion but we can also change or form it like our interloctuor. In this situation we can notice that some people has problem with comunicating. The reason can be some prejudices like diffrence age, cash at hand, position at work etc. We don't talk to someone because we fear of deny our opinion or defeat. We can have quarelssom character like this person too. Somebody peciulary ignore some people because they want to emphisize a distance. In spite of all obstruction we should keep talking. I completely agree with the sentence from the first headline- text mnessages don't do the job. Nowadays people talk together too little., because they are often busy and they use mobile phone and the Net. In my opinion the most important is directly contact. by e- mail and sms we can't tell everything with details only general and we can't know someone's opinion exactly it's easy to lay. It's difficult to console somebody and share hapiness> And we don;t have visual contact.

przepisz to bez bledow ortog. -
Tn the 2 pictures 'of all' (niepotrz) we can see rather unpleasant situations. In the first we 'cen' (ortog) see 'prpably' (ortog) mother with her child who is crying 'an' (ort) is sad. A child's head 'is being' (niepo) 'lain' (zly czas) 'by' (niepot) child on 'her's' (nie) mother'S knees. A 'women' (jedna czy dwie) is 'stroiking' (ortog) THE child's head and she's trying hard to GET TO know what's the reason that her daughter feelS bad. I'm sure that she's using tender words to understand HER daughter's problems. Finally THE child will open heart to 'her's' (HER) mother. Conversation is needed by everybody when they've 'got' IN A bad mood.
Pierre Corneille said that when we were talking 'abot' (ortog) our sufferings we
often eased them. I think this quotation is confirmed by
>another picture in which we can see alone and 'disheartned' (ortog) women (to l.mn) She 'hasn'y'(ortog) got 'nobody' ANYBODY to talk TO about her sorrow.

ok dzięki a te ortograficzne to dlatego że się śpieszyłam a klawiatura mi niełączy trochę. A reszta jest dobrze sprawdziłeś to całe?

ciag dalszy-
.. someone helpful she wouldn't have 'concerned' (moze remained)alone at home. We 'feel' (niepotrz) also need to share our haPpiness with 'another' OTHER people. So we often want to talk about 'this' SOMETHING special with close frienDs or some member of our family.
'It shows very good next two picture among all' - tego zdania nie rozumiem.
In 'the' (bez the) one of them we can see two young women in 'the' A restaurant. They're smiling, 'giglessing' GIGGLING and gOSSIping about something nice. They are aQUAInted very well and they trust 'to' (niepotrz) each other. In the seconD photo we cAn see two families. 'ot one big' (niepotrz). They are spending time together 'on' AT 'the' A picnic. They 'at' ARE restING. They are joking and talking ABOUT something pleasant. There are plenty of laughS and haPpiness. In 'the all' ALL THE cases I was talking about people use informal language and they are rather stressED out. They are also wearing casuAL clothes and they are EITHER outdoor or at home.
Whereas in the last picture we can see people who are wearing smart CLOTHES. There IS A tense atmosphere. ..They are keeping one another 'on' AT a distance. Propbably they'll have to come to an agreement anD they'll want to sign a contract. SO they're trying TO persuade one another to their reason by relevant arGUMENTS. During A conversation we can express our opinion, but we can also change or form it like our interlocUTOR. In this situation we can notice that some people haVE A problem with comunicating. The reason can be some prejudices 'like' SUCH AS diffErence IN age, 'cash at hand' (nie, lepiej financial position), position at work etc. We 'don't' (lepiej MAY NOT talk to someone because we fear THEM 'of' OR deny our opinion or WE FEAR defeat. We can have A quarelSOME character like this person too. Somebody pARTICUlarLy ignoreS some people because they want to emphisize a distance.
..mobile phoneS and the Net. In my opinion the most important is direCT contact By e-mail and 'sms' TEXT we can't tell everything with EXACT details only general (conversation?) and we can't know someone's opinion exactly AND it's easy to 'lay' LIE (lay to cos innego).

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