Bardzo prosze o sprawdzenie, bardzo ważne

Najpierw bardzo dziekuję Terri , która sprawdziła moja ostatnia pracę.

Education does not have to end when we leave school.(Do you agree with this statement?)

From an early age, education has huge influence on our development. Nowadays, we can see that children begin to learn more and more early. Even in the kindergarden children learn about world around their . For many people time of school is the most beautiful time in their life. Thanks to learning we can conquered knowledge from wide variety of topics. Duty of school covers young people for 18 year old . But it doesn't mean that we have to end our education after secondery school. On the contrary , for some people it is the beginning of a lifetime of learning. A world constantly changes a lot, so also we should broaden our know ledge. A time devoted to learning never is lost. In large measure our career depends on our skilled. A lot od people go to university , because higher education is one of the important factors of one's success. By attending to university we gain a deeper knowledge than those which we get from secondery school. Unfortunately all can't study, but there are other possibilities of learning. People who works can attend evening course after work. Besides we can develop knowledge related with our interests.
All in all it appears that eduaction is very important and knowledge is a powerful tool in future life, so we should learn as long a time as possible.

Nowadays, we can see that children begin to learn more and more 'early' (moze- earlier on).
Even in 'the' (jabym uzyla 'A') kindergarden children learn about THE world around theM . For many people time 'of' AT school is the most beautiful time in their life.
Thanks to learning we can conqueR knowledge from A wide variety of
topics. 'Duty of school' (THE DUTY TO ATTEND school) covers young people 'for 18 year old' UNTIL THEY ARE 18.
...secondAry school.
'A' THE world constantly changes a lot, so 'also we should' WE SHOULD ALSO broaden our knowledge. A time devoted to learning 'never is' IS NEVER lost. In large measure our career depends on our skillS. A lot oF people go to
...By attending 'to' A university we gain a deeper knowledge than 'those' THAT which we 'get' HAVE from secondery school. Unfortunately
all can't study, (tutaj mozesz napisac dlaczego....) but there are other possibilities of 'learning' (mozna ..of continuing our studies).
People who 'works' WORK can attend evening courseS after work. Besides we can
develop knowledge related 'with' TO our interests.
All in all it appears that eduCAtion is very important and knowledge
is a powerful tool in OUR future life, so we should learn FOR as long a time as possible.

Dziękuje bardzo za pomoc i sprawdzenie:)

kindergarten*
(der ;-))