czy to sa poprawne zdania?

On 14/06/07 employer failed to increase amount paid for Lost Ticket on the Till. Employer should have done Fee o'ride for £35 for customer who had been stayed 2 days at Car Park. Although CPA charged customer £70, Last Daily Total shows that amount paid is only £35.

Troche to pewnie skomplikowane, ale chodzi o to, ze pracownik nie podwyzszyl opaty na kasie o £35. (Kasa automatycznie pokazuje £35 za dzien). Klijent parkowal 2 dni, wiec oplata wynosi 35+35 co daje 70. Pracownik wzial od klijenta 70, ale dokumenty tego nie pokazuja. Pracownik powinien nacisnac na kasie dodatkowe 35.

Jesli ktos polapie sie o co chodzi :-), prosze o porawienie bledów w tekscie (po ang oczywiscie :-)

On 14/06/07 employer failed to increase THE amount to be tilled.
THE CUSTOMER parked for 2 days which should results in a FEE of £35 plus £35 equal to £70. (£35 per day)
Although THE CPA charged THE customer £70, THE last Daily Total shows that THE amount tilled was only £35, therefore the employee should till another £35.