Krótki tekst. Proszę o sprawdzenie.

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Proszę o sprawdzenie. Praca samodzielna.

a. If the marketing agreement is between undertakings, has effect on trade between member States and disturbes the competition at the common market it is autommatically void. If the contract between Kashif Ltd. and other businness would fulfil those terms it wolud be automatically void.

There is necessary to talk more about “effect on trade between member States”. It is fulfilled when “with a sufficient degree of probability, on the basis of a set of objective factors of law or of fact, that they have an influence, direct or indirect, actual or potential, on the pattern of trade between Member States in such a way as to cause concern that they might hinder the attainment of a single market between Member States” . Important here is Non-Appreciable Affect Trade Rule (NAAT Rule) according to which “(agreement does not have effect on trade when) aggregate market share threshold is 5 % and an aggregate EC turnover threshold of 40 milion Euro of all the undretakings concerned in relevant products” . If Agreement between Kashif Ltd. and other business would have impact on trade and outdo perceding ratios it would have effect on EC law.

Proszę.

a. If the marketing agreement is between (TWO) undertakings, IT has AN effect on
trade between member States and disturbes the competition 'at'? (cos to nie tak, moze WITHIN) the Common Market it is autommatically void. If the contract between Kashif Ltd. and ANother businness 'would' fulfilS those terms it woOULD be automatically void.
There is necessITY (albo IT is necessary) to talk more 'about' (REGARDING THE) “effect on trade between member States". 'It' (co? lepiej THIS) is fulfilled when “with a sufficient degree of probability, on the basis of a set of objective factors of law or of fact, 'that'(niepotrz) they have an influence...
OF importaNCE HERE is THE Non-Appreciable Affect Trade Rule (NAAT Rule) according to..
If AN agreement between Kashif Ltd. and ANother business 'would' haS AN impact on trade and 'outdo' (moze inne slowo - reaches above) THE pREceding ratios 'it would have AN effect on EC law' (chyba to ma byc ...the EC law would have an effect on this agreement).

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