zdania dwa:)bardzo proszę o sprawdzenie

I’d like to broaden my law knowledge and improve my English skills as far as lawer vocabulary is concerned. I hope, it will also get me the chance to take part in the classes, which are condected by lawyers from Europe and the USA.
Czy mogłabym prosić o sprawdzenie poprawności w/w zdań, będę wdzięczna, dziękuję:)

broaden my knowledge OF THE LAW
as far as ENGLISH LEGAL TERMINOLOGY/ JARGON is concerned
in classes (bez: which are) conducted

..also GIVE me the chance

Bardzo dziękuję za pomoc:)) teraz z czystym sumieniem mogę to wysłać:) pozdrawiam

Don't.

...to broaden my knowledge of (no article for subjects) law/Roman law/criminal law/contract law/or the law (for a given set of rules or law enforcement agencies:) the US criminal law/in Medieval England, and to improve my English (or to build up my English vocabulary). Don't say "English skills."

I hope I will have the opportunity of attending the workshop taught by lawyers from Europe and the USA.

Raz jeszcze dziękuję...THANK YOU:) w takim razie wysyłam