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Hi, John.

How are you? Hope you're well. I'm writing to you because I must tell you about my plans. After I finishing the secondary school I would like to study at the Warsaw technical university. I would like to study on ETi direction. Next after studies I am going to open the own company connected with computers and creating the software. In the course of the development of the company I would open new points in entire country. Apart from that to the company it is possible in order to gain access not only through stationary points but also with internet connection. I always dream about create corporation. My problem is that I didn't want learnig to much. Next I buy my dream car and I'll travel all the world

Well, I must finish now because I must ride to my grandparents. Write back soon and tell me all your news. All the best

Hi, (po co przecinek?) John.

...After I 'finishing' FINISH the secondary school I would like to study at the Warsaw 'technical university' (nazwa wlasna - wielka litera). I would like
to study 'on ETi direction' (tego nie rozumiem).
'Next' (lepiej THEN) after studies I am going to open 'the' (niepotrz, lepiej MY) own company connected with computers and creating 'the' (niepotrz, mozna ..and software creation) software. In the course of the development of the company I would (mozna dodac 'also')open new 'points' locations) in
THE entire country.
Apart from that 'to the company it is possible in order to gain access' IT WOULD BE POSSIBLE TO GAIN ACCESS TO THE COMPANY not only through 'stationary' (czy masz na mysli stationAry czy stationEry?) points 'but' (niepotrz lepiej AND) also with internet connection.
I always dream about 'create corporation' THE CREATION OF A CORPORATION. My
problem 'is' (is czy was??) that I didn't want 'learnig' (literowka? TO LEARN) toO much. Next I WILL buy my dream car and I'll travel all OVER the world
Well, I must finish now because I must 'ride' (czy masz na mysli write czy ride a bicycle?) to my grandparents. Write back soon and tell me all your news.

Hi, (po co przecinek?) John.

...After I FINISH the secondary school I would like to study at the Warsaw 'Technical University'. I would like
to study 'on ETi direction' (kierunek studiów).
Then after studies I am going to open my own company connected with computers and and software creation. In the course of the development of the company I would also open new 'points' locations) in
THE entire country.
Apart from that 'to the company it is possible in order to gain access' IT WOULD BE POSSIBLE TO GAIN ACCESS TO THE COMPANY not only through 'stationary' (w znaczeniu ' punkty stacjonarne ') points and also with internet connection.
I always dream about THE CREATION OF A CORPORATION. My
problem 'is' (is) that I didn't want 'learning' too much. Next I WILL buy my dream car and I'll travel all OVER the world
Well, I must finish now because I must 'ride a bicycle' to my grandparents. Write back soon and tell me all your news.

Hello John,

How are you? Hope your're well. I'm writing to you because I would like to tell you about my (future) plans. After I have finished my secondary school I would like to study at Warsaw University of Technology*. I would like to study (pełna nazwa kierunku)**. When I graduate, I am going to establish my own computer company and create computer software***. If my company grows, I will open subsidiaries all over Poland. Of course, I will also offer online access to my company via the website. I have always dreamt about establishing my own company. The problem was that I didn't want to learn too much. I would also like to buy my dream car and travel around the world****.


*Politechnika Warszawska, bo to chyba o nią chodzi, nazywa się oficjalnie po angielsku Warsaw University of Technology.
** Jeśli my tu nie jesteśmy w stanie zrozumieć, co chcesz studiować to Twój kolega/koleżanka też tego nie zrozumie.
*** Może warto bardziej szczegółowo, jaki rodzaj oprogramowania? Finansowe? Gry? Aplikacje?
**** Może na końcu warto powiedzieć coś więcej o podróżach itp.?

Pozdrawiam
O.

Ups, jeszcze końcówka :>

I must finish now because I must go and see my grandparents. Write back soon and tell me all the news.

All the best,

Dziękuje za tak szybką reakcję i pozdrawiam. Już wiem wszystko co chciałem.