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Dear Emily!

Thanks for your postcard for me. How are you? I sorry I haven't written for so long, but I didn't have time.
I spend my holiday in Greece. I've met a boy. Him name is Lukas. We met in the park opposite my hotel.
I learnt in holidays indepenendence and courage. Frist day I will go to the Akropol, next days I want to swim in the sea and I saw very old churchs.
Nowadays my medicine studies, I founf a job in a local hospital where I work as a surgean. I help people with broken legs, arms and hands. In free I going to the cinema and playing tennis.
When I finished my studies (i tutaj chcialabym napisac, ze chce zostac lekarzem, bo lubie pomagac ludziom, ale niebardzo wiem, ja to napisac).

Bede bardzo wdzieczna za poprawienie i skorygowanie listu i doisanie brakujacego zdania Bardzo diekuje z gory za pomoc. :)

Thanks for your postcard. 'for me' (wg mnie niepotr). How are you? I'M sorry I haven't written for so long, but I (mozna dodac 'simply') didn't have THE time.
I 'spend' (czas przeszly to spenT) my holiday in Greece. I've met a boy. 'Him' HIS name is Lukas. We met in the park opposite my hotel.
(mozna dodac During the holidays) I learnt 'in holidays' (niepotr) 'indepenendence' INDEPENDENCE and courage. ON THE 'Frist' (ortog - first) day I 'will go' (tutaj potrz czas przeszly - went) to the Akropol AND FOR THE next days I 'want' (nie, zly czasownik - tutaj WENT) 'to swim' SWIMMING in the sea and I saw very old churchEs.
'Nowadays my medicine studies' (cos tego nie rozumiem??), I 'founf' (literowka? powinno byc found) a job in a local hospital where I work as a 'surgean' (ortog - prosze popraw). I help people with broken 'legs, arms and hands' (generalnie jest przyjete, ze pisze sie ...hands, arms and legs).
In free TIME I 'going' GO to the cinema and 'playing' PLAY tennis.(mozesz powiedziec I like going to ...and playing..)
When I finish my studies ...I would like to become a doctor, as I have always liked helping ill people become well again.

Bardzo jestem wdzięczna za poprawienie bledow i skorygowanie calej pracy, dziękuje. :)