Bardzo proszę o sprawdzenie!!

Proszę o sprawdzenie czy nie ma tu jakiś wielgasnych błędów i ewentualnie uwagi jezeli zauważycie że coś "nie gra" :) A być może jeżeli uznacie,że jakies wyrażenie lepiej zastąpić innym i będzie to lepiej brzmieć :) Z góry dziękuje :)

"My name is Paulina. I have sixteen years old and live in Jeżów- the small village near Brzeziny. I live there from birth and I hope not to dead . I have younger brother – Daniel, and he go to Primary school. In my spare time I like reading the books. My favorite book is “Just one look” Harlan Coben. Apart from that I like playing basketball, watching TV, playing in computer games and listing the music. My favorite band is the prodigy. Their music is consist of various styles from rave to alternative rock. I love this music because it make I feel free. I can’t stand boredom – I must something doing all the time. On school subject I like Polish and geography and hate maths, because in operates maths is only one good result. In future I want be a journalist because is very excited job. Anything can happened in this job – for example earthquake – I mast to be prepared. "

W zasadzie praca nadaje się do napisania od nowa, na palcach jednej ręki można bezbłędne zdania policzyć.

My name is Paulina. I have sixteen years old and (I) live in Jeżów- the
small village near Brzeziny. I live there from birth and I hope (that) not to
dead. I have younger brother - Daniel, and he go to Primary
school. In my spare time I like reading the books. My favorite book is
“Just one look" Harlan Coben. Apart from that I like playing
basketball, watching TV, playing in computer games and listing (to)
music. My favorite band is the prodigy. Their music is consist of
various styles from rave to alternative rock. I love this music
because it make (that) I feel free. I can't stand boredom - I must something
doing all the time. I like Polish and geography and (I)
hate maths, because in operates maths is only one good result. In
future I want be a journalist because it very excited job. Anything
can happened in this job - for example earthquake - I (must) be
prepared. "


wydaje mi sie, ze dobrze poprawiłam :P

>wydaje mi sie, ze dobrze poprawiłam :P

Przeciez nic tam nie poprawilas.

Poprawie-
Prosze mi napisac podrecznik w ktorym jest napisane 'I have 16 years' (prosze napisac to po ang-i poprawnie I....) I have sixteen years old and live in Jeżów-the small village near Brzeziny. I HAVE liveD there from birth and I hope not to 'dead' (dead to rzecownik - tutaj potrzeba czasownika). I have A younger brother - Daniel, and he goES to A Primary school. In my spare time I like reading 'the' (bez 'the') books. My favorite book is “Just one look" BY Harlan Coben. Apart from that, I like playing basketball, watching TV, playing 'in' (niepotr) computer games and 'listing' (mysle, ze to literowka - lisTening) TO 'the' (niepotr)
music. My favorite band is The Prodigy (imiona wlasne piszemy wielka litera). Their music 'is'(niepotr) consistS of various styles from rave to alternative rock. I love this music because it makeS 'I' (zle uzycie 'I'- to powinno byc 'me - (po polsku nie 'ja' ale 'mnie') feel free. I can't stand boredom - I must BE 'something doing' (zla kolejnosc slow ...doing something) all the time. 'On' OUT OF THE school subjectS I like Polish and geography and
I hate maths, because 'in operates maths is only one good result' (prosze to napisac po polsku - wiem, co masz na mysli-ale to tak nie wychodzi).
In THE future I want TO be a journalist because IT is A very 'excited' (nie, exciting)job. Anything can 'happened' HAPPEN (happened - to czas przeszly) in this job - for example earthquake - I 'mast' (chyba literowka - MUST - 'mast' to cos innego-zobacz w slowniku) 'to' (niepotr) be prepared.

Jako przyszła dziennikarka, musisz znać j. ang bardzo dobrze. Dużo pracy przed Tobą jeszcze.

My name is Paulina. I'm sixteen and live in a small village - Jeżów nearby Brzeziny town. Here I was born and here I want to die. I have a younger brother - Daniel, who is go going to the Primary School at the moment.

I like reading books at my leisure and doing other crazy stuff when I'm completely free from any duties. My favourite book is "Just one look" by Harlan Coben.
I'm not a bookworm, though. I also like playing basketball, watching TV, playing computer games and listening to music. My favorite band is the Prodigy. Their music combines many various styles from a classic to an alternative rock. I love that music, because it makes me feel free.

I am sort of person who hates boredom. I really must do something to keep entertaing myself all the time. As for school subjects I like Polish, Geography, but hate Mathematics. (dalej nie wiem co chcialas powiedziec, napisz po polsku)

I want to be a journalist in the future. It seems to be a very excting job to me. You never know what may happen in a few seconds, you have to be alert of a danger when you go on a round. It may be an earthquake that happens, so keeping a look-out is a requisite. I would love to be a journalist.

merix -
kochanie - juz i ty nie wierzysz w moje umiejetnosci i mnie poprawiasz??? :D
twoj tekst jest dobry, ale niektore slowa/phrazy sa na wyzszym stopniu jak pytajaca potrzebuje.

...I really must do something to keep entertaiNng myself all the time. (widze, to zdanie inaczej...I really must do something to keep myself entertained all the time)
...you have to be alert of 'a' (moze lepiej bez 'a' albo 'any') danger when you go 'on a round' (czy masz na mysli out on a job?).

Wierze, wierze,

Długo mi sie zeszlo na pisanie tego postu bo ktos przyjechal, zanim wkleilem to juz sie kilka innych pojawilo, takze nie znalem powyzszej tresci.

I really must do something to keep myself
>entertained all the time) - zmienilas znaczenie ale tez jest Ok.

a danger = any
when you go on a round = when you go to do research on the spot, etc.

Wielgaśnie dzięki, jesteście kochani :) Wiem że czeka mnie dużo pracy ale mysle ze dam radę :) Jeszcze raz wielkie dzięki i pozdrowionka dla was :)