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Can you imagine how Egyptian workers built, the Greate Pyramid more than 4,500 years ago?.....(1)....But it's not just very big,its measurements also show that people of Egypt knew a lot about mathematics....(2)...They also understood north,south,east and west, and used them to decide where put the pyramid. But why were the pyramids of Egypt built?...(3)...No human bodies were found in the main rooms, but it's possible that these were taken by robbers many hundreds of years ago.However in the 1920s a Frenchman discovered a dead cat in the center of Great Pyramid. Bovis was interested to see that animals' bodies were undamaded and dry. He thought that perhaps the shape of the pyramid helped this to happen ...(4)... It quickly dried. Many people think that the rooms and the tunnels that join them were made to watch the stars...(5)...

Do wyboru:
A Perhaps they were religious places where the dead bodies of important people were put
B they say that Egyptians had good understanding of astronomy
C Perhaps its because the pyramid has a magnetic field
D Fo example they used the number "Pi"-3.1416
E they did not have machines-did they use magic?
F He made a model pyramid and placed a dead cat inside

Moje odpowiedzi:
1.E
2.D
3.a
4.F
5. B
Dziękuję za sprawdzenie;)
wg mnie -nie.
1 d
2 b
3 a
4 f
5 c
Ja uzupełniłabym tak samo jak Emilcia.
przeczytalam jeszcze raz.
1. powinno byc 'e' (sorry)
2. napisalam 'b' dlatego, ze pisze...They say....They also understood
dalej mysle.
>2. napisalam 'b' dlatego, ze pisze...They say....They also understood
>dalej mysle.

Ale "they" z "they say" to nie ci sami they, co w "they also".

They say = Many people say that Egyptians (...)
They also understood = Egyptians also understood (...)
Witam serdecznie:)
Mam taką prośbę czy możnabyłoby spr. mi moje błędy:)
Dear Paulina
How are you? i hope you are well . i'am sorry i haven't written for so long. three days ago i came back from my holiday. i was in Barcelona. It;s big city in Spain. I lived in youth hostel near beautiful castle. This place was overlooking the forest. i had got a small room and i lived alone. In free time i went to shopping and i learned english and spanish but at the same time i was meeting Thomas. He was also at the same place where i learned english. He looked very nice. Later we began talking. That was very interesting experiement. I hato to finish now.
Hope to hear from you.
Take care,
XYZ
PS: jestem dyslektyczką, zapewne zrobiłam troche błędów ortograficznych z góry przepraszam,ale miałabym rpśbę o spr i wwypisanie mi jak ten list powinien wygladać poprawnie:
Bardzo dziękuje
i POZDRAWIAM:)
pomyslalam wiecej o tym -
teraz dochodze, ze pierwsze odpowiedzi byly o.k. ja to po prostu inaczej czytalam.
poprawie-
'i' ('I' w jez. ang piszemy wielka litera, nie tylko na poczatku zdania ale zawsze)
I lived in 'A' youth hostel near 'A' beautiful castle.
This place 'was overlooking' (lepiej overlooked) the forest.
In MY free time I went 'to' (bez 'to') shopping and I 'learned' (lepiej studied) English and Spanish, but at the same time I 'was meeting' MET Thomas. That was A very interesting experiMENT. (nie wiem, czy rozmowa z chlopakiem moze byc nazwana experimentem, mozna tez uzyc 'time'.)
I haVE to finish now.
Hope to hear from you SOON.
Z góry baaardzo dziękuje za poprawienie moich błędów, jestem niezmiernie wdzięczna :), bardzo mi to pomogło:)Jeżeli byłaby taka możliwośc napisałam jeszcze jeden list, który napewno wymaga jakichś poprawek , dlatego prosze o pozytywne rozmaptrzenie tego listu formalnego:)

Dear Mr Brown

My name is Sylwia Kotarka I am eighteen years old. I live in Częstochowa in Poland. I am writting to you in reference to studing at your univerity. I a graduate from high school in London and i have got great results. I want start to studing english language because i think that this language is very usefull now. My matura;s results were wery well (polish language 80%, english language 90%, history 100%)My english is very goog because i used to live in England. I would like to studing abroad because in future i wuould like to apply for teacher and second reason is that i will be earn a lots of money.
I would appreciate a reply at your earliest convenience.
Your faithfully
XYZ
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