Sprawdzenie

Proszę o sprawdzenie... i dodanie zdan których nie wiedzialam ;)
Z góry:
Bardzo dziękuje ;* :*


My neighbour from “od kiedy pamiętam” is Monika. She live past me. She nickname is Moni. She's older than me. She’s 18 years old, but she’s my friends. ”chodzi do tej szkoły co ja” She has blue eyes, brown medium hair, oval face, full lips and a dark complexion. She very nice and beautiful. She have a brother, 3 sisters and dog. Her brother name’s Tomek and her sisters name’s Paulina Ewelina and Agnieszka. She is interested in music and she likes read a book. Her favourite music group is Good Charlotte. She like watch Tv. Her favourite program is MTV. She hates counterfeit people.
“Spędzamy ze sobą dużo czasu” We goes to pub's and we loves to dance. We goes on the walk with dogs. „Wracamy razem ze szkoły, nie raz odrabiamy razem lekcje i duzo rozmawiamy. she helps me with my problems.

Ever since I can remember, my neighbour has been Monika. She lives past(?)
me. Her nickname is Moni. She's older than me. She's 18 years old, but
she is my friend. She goes to the same school as I do. She has blue eyes,
brown medium-length hair, oval face, full lips and a dark complexion. She's
very nice and beautiful. She has a brother, 3 sisters and dog. Her
brother name is Tomek and her sisters names arevPaulina, Ewelina and
Agnieszka. She is interested in music and she likes read a book.
Her favourite music group is Good Charlotte. She like watch Tv. Her
favourite program is MTV. She hates counterfeit people.
“We spend a lot of time together." We go to pubs and we love to
dance. We take walks with the dogs. "We return form school together, nie
raz (?) do our homework together and talk a lot. she helps me with my
problems.

Wielkie dzięki ;)

"She lives
>past(?)" Miało być ze miszka obok mnie ale nie wiem jak to napisac:P To jak to bedzie?

>music and she likes read a book.

likes reading books/ likes to read books/ she likes to read a book from time to time etc.

>She like watch Tv

She likes ... ( patrz wyżej)

>program

programme

>She hates counterfeit people.

false, incincere, but counterfeit?

>We take walks with the dogs.

which dogs? our would be better here, wouldn't it?