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Karolina was nine years old and anong with her parents lived in low-rise apartment house where the other twelve families lodged. The girl has always daydreamt about a pet, but mum – Teresa and daddy – Jan, haven’t agreed. They both had a job and the flat wasn’t large enough. Karolina in spite of that asked for a pet and sometimes she helped her neighbour with walk the dog. The ten Karolina’s birthday was nearing. Teresa and Jan has decided to present her a dog. At the day of birthday the family went to the shelter to choose and adopt one of the pets. In the kennel were a lot of homeless dogs and cats. Karolina wanted to take all pets preferably. Small, red-grey and sad puppy caught her eye. And in this way “Atos” came to his new house.

... i dziękuję !

Karolina was nine years old and aLong with her parents lived in 'A' low-rise apartment...
The girl has always daydreamt about a pet, but HER `mum - Teresa and daddy - Jan, 'haven't' DIDN'T agreE. 'Karolina in spite of that' (moze lepiej But in spite of that, K) asked for a pet and sometimes she helped her neighbour with walkING the dog. 'The ten Karolina's' (K tenth birthday was getting near..) birthday was nearing. Teresa and Jan haD decided to 'present her a dog' (give her a dog as a present) 'At' ON the day of HER birthday the family went to the shelter to choose and adopt one of the pets. In the kennel THERE were a lot of homeless dogs and cats.
Karolina wanted to take all pets. 'preferably' (moze cos takiego If she had a choice, K would have taken all the pets home).

Dziękuję terri. (Szkoda że nie ma emotikonek, dostałabyś buziaka :) )