Poprawiona całość - proszę o spr.

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To jest już wszystko. Włącznie z zakończeniem. Proszę o sprawdzenie. Dziękuję.

The girl was happy and she took care of Atos every day. The dog was growing. One day Karolina got to know that she will have a brother. After nine months Karol was born. When he was six months in the house fire broke out. The fire diffused very quickly. Smoke was dense and stifling. The firemen saved Karolina and her parents but im the middle of building Karol and Atos stayed. Every minute was valuable to save their’s life. Suddenly everyone saw the dog was bringing the baby. Atos put little Karol away. After the fire extinction one of the firemen told that he had heard barking into the building but the smoke prevented seeing anything. The dog seved Karol’s life. Today the family live in their’s own house outside town. Atos, Karolina and Karol play often in the garden and Korol started speaking and the first word which he said was the name of the beloved dog.
up up proszę o sprawdzenie.. :(
>>>>The girl was happy and she took care of Atos every day. The dog was
growing. One day Karolina got to know that she will have a brother.
After nine months Karol was born. When he was six months in the house
fire broke out. The fire diffused very quickly. Smoke was dense and
stifling. The firemen saved Karolina and her parents but im the middle
of building Karol and Atos stayed.
>>>...To juz wczesniej poprawilam.

Every minute was valuable to save 'their's' THEIR 'life' (life to l. poj a tutaj mowa o 2 - LIVES). Suddenly everyone saw THAT the dog was bringing OUT the baby.
....Atos put little Karol away - tego zdania calkowicie nie rozumiem
After the fire 'extinction' (zle slowo - WAS EXTINGUISHED) one of the firemen told (komu???- czy masz na mysli SAID) that he had heard barking 'into' IN the building, but the smoke prevented HIM FROM seeing anything. The dog 'seved' SAVED Karol's life. Today the family live in 'their's' (niepotrzeba 's - slowo jest THEIR) own house outside OF town. Atos, Karolina and Karol 'play often' (often play) in the garden and Korol started 'speaking' TALKING and the
first word which he said was the name of the beloved dog.
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