Bardzo proszę o sprawdzenie moich wypocin..

At these future school every pupil will have the same dress, there will not be needed books, exercises books and pens. classes will take 5 hours only each day, brakes will take longer than now 15 min every and dinner brake 1 hour. three months summer holiday and 2 months winter holyday. There will not be a division for a subjects like a biology or maths. Every day pupils will learn something what they like, and what they will be interested in teachers will be replace with a central computer. In nice rooms will be very comfortable armchairs with a touch control panells and helmet with three-dimensional glasses. They will put the helmet on and on a touch contol panell they will select a subject which they will want to learn. Pupils will learn by watch and listen only.There will not be neither tests nor homeworks. They will get certificate only for a attendance in school. If they will be polly they will use same helmet at home witch they will can borow from school They will go to school with a plesure without stress. School like that is my dream.



Proszę bardzo o sprawdzenie mi tego wypracowania jestem bardzo słaba z angielskiego... Wiec prosze o sprawdzenie moich wypocin wrazie jakiej niezgodności jakis słówek mozna wpisac inne zeby to miało jakis sens... to jest temat mojego wypracowania szkoła za sto lat ... school in one hundert years time will be completely different than present school. To jest bardzo ważne błagam o pomoc

Proszę pomoże mi ktos?? siedziałam nad tym 3 godziny...

wlasnie poprawilam Ci cala prace i dodalam troche i nie chcialo sie wyslac i przepadlo;/ zaraz jeszcze raz napisze

At the future school every pupil will have the same dress, there will not be obligation to have bokks, exercises books or even pens. Classes will take 5 hours each day only. Breaks will take longer that 15min. Moreover, there will be a dinner break which will endure 1 hour.
Furthermore, summer holiday will last 3 months and there will be 2 months of winter holiday. There will not be a division for a subjects like a biology or maths. Each day pupils will learn something what they really like. What is the most interesting is that the teachers will be replaced by computers.
What is more, there will be comfortable and modern equipment in the classrooms like nice looking armchairs with a touch control panells and helmet with three-dimensional glasses. Students will put the helmet on and when they touch a control panell they will select a subject which they will be in favour of.
Moreover, there will not be neither tests nor homeworks. Students will get a certificate only for an attendance at school.
That is how the school in one hundred years will look like. The modern school will be much more different from the present one. From my point of view learnig at such school will be pleasure for students as there will be no stress and hard work. This is the school of my dream.

'At' IN the 'future school' (the school of the future) every pupil will have the same dress, there will not be AN obligation to have 'bokks' (books), exercises books or even pens. Classes will ONLY take 5 hours each day. 'only' (niepotr). Breaks will take longer that 15min (to znaczy ile 2 godz? 3 godz?).
Moreover, there will be a dinner break which will 'endure' (zle slowo - tutaj LAST) 1 hour.
Furthermore, summer holiday will last FOR 3 months and there will be 2
months of winter holiday. There will not be a 'division for a subjects' (subej division) like 'a' (niepotr) biology or maths. Each day pupils will learn something 'what' WHICH they really like. What is 'the' (niepotr) most interesting is that the teachers will be replaced by computers. (Will the computers be handsome?)
What is more, there will be comfortable and modern equipment in the
classrooms like 'nice looking' (mozna tez comfortable) armchairs with 'a' (niepotr) touch control 'panells' (panels) and helmetS with three-dimensional glasses. Students will put the helmet on and when they touch a control 'panell' Panel) they will select 'a subject which they will be in favour of' (moze lepiej...their favourite subject).
Moreover, there will not be either tests nor ANY homework.
That is how (dodaj I hope) the school in 'one hundred' (mozna 100) years will look like.
FROM my point of view 'learnig' (learning) at such A school will be A pleasure for students as there will be no stress and NO hard work INVOLVED. This is the school of my dreamS.

staralam sie jak najmniej zmienic ta prace ;p a z niektorymi rzeczami sie zupelnie nie zgadzam ;p coprawda gdzieniegdzie sa literowki bo szybko pisane ;p a co to znaczy ''at in the future school'' ? nie jest konieczne pisanie ile przerwy beda trwaly;p ''beda trwaly dluzej niz 15min''starczy; 'endure' jest jak najbardziej poprawne, dalej 'for' zupelnie niepotrzebne, zamiast 'which' to ja naprawde upieram sie przy 'what' :D , nice looking o wiele ladniej brzmi ;D , 'in favour of' to znacznie ladniejszy zwrot niz zwykle 'favourite', 'neither tests nor homework' tam nie moze byc zadnego 'ANY', 'I hope' - wlasnie czegos mi brakowalo i to pasuje :), 'involved' jest niekonieczne. heh pozdrawiam ;d

Paula,
Jak ja poprawiam, to kiedy wyraz jest bledny, to jego umieszczam w 'at' a duzymi literami pisze poprawny wyraz.
prosze zobacz co znaczy slowo 'endure'
A z tymi innymi to zobacze jeszcze raz, ale mysle, ze moja wersja jest dobra.

Dziekuje wam bardzo :):):)

Terri,
tak tez myslalam ;p ale nadal uwazam ze bedzie 'at', owszem mowi sie ''in the future' (co jest oczywiste) ale mowi sie 'at school', 'at home', co do 'endure' sie nie upieram, ale oznacza tez 'trwac' i kiedys tak pisalam i bylo dobrze:)

Ale zadanie bylo o ....In the school of the future
endure - tak, to znaczy 'trwac', w sensie ..I must endure something, something must be endured..ale nie uzywamy tego jak mowimy o czasie tzn Jak cos bedzie trwalo 1 godz - 'something will last one hour'.

moim zdaniem 'endure' tu nie pasuje; owszem, oznacza trwać, ale jest bardzo formalne i nie użyjemy w zwrocie 'przerwa trwa ...'

favourite subjects a subject they are in favour of, to nie to samo, wiec nie mozna pisac, ze jest 'ładniejsze , niz zwykłe favourite'

tam nie moze byc: ''such A school'' takiego czegos nie ma, mowi sie np 'such a nice gift' - 'a' piszemy razem z przymiotnikiem, w tym przypadku bedzie same 'such school'

>tam nie moze byc: ''such A school'' takiego czegos nie ma

nigdy nie mów NIGDY, bo takie cos jak najbardziej jest i bez tego 'a' nie brzmi dobrze

heh nie zgadzam sie, 'be in favour of' - np. I'm in favour of swimming. (lubie plywanie) 'my favourite pastime is swimming'(moja ulubiona rozrywka jest plywanie) jedno i drugie znacza to samo (nie ma wiekszej roznicy) :)

haha NIGDY NIC NIE WIADOMO ;p to wytlumacz mi dlaczego tam niby moze byc 'such a school' ? moim zdaniem nie bedzie ;p i lepiej o wiele brzmi bez 'a'

(nie ma
>wiekszej roznicy) :)

jest różnica, 'to be in favour of sth' to byc za czymś, popierać to (pomijajac inne znaczenia, jak np zastepowac), upraszczajac sobie sprawe mozna przetłumaczyc jako 'lubić' tak wiedc zdanie 'i'm in favour of swimming' w j. ang niesie ze soba więcej informacji, niz zwykłe polskie

you can be in favour of a subject but it doesn't necessarily have to be your favourite subject

IN these future schoolS every pupil have the same STRICT DRESS, there
>are NO books, exercises books and pens NEEDED. Classes are no longer than
>only 5 hours every day, brakes LAST longer than 15 minUTES and LUNCH brake is longer than just 1 hour. After completing education pupils go on Three-month summer holiday and TWO-MONTH winter holIday. There are no division for subjects SUCH AS biology or mathEMATICS. Pupils learn something what they REALLY
>like, and IN which they are interested every day. Teachers ARE REPLACED BY THE central computer. THERE ARE nice rooms in which students can find very comfortable armchairs equipped with touch control. Moreover, panels with touch screens and helmets with three-dimensional glasses. All they have to do is to put the helmet on and touch the PANEL CONTROL. Selection of a subject which they want to learn is proceeded. Pupils learn by watching and listening only. There are no tests nor homeworks. They get certificate only for being at school. If they want to be A polly they will use the same helmet at home, witch I think is a good idea, because they can borrow it from school. (SZCZERZE TO NIE WIEM CO CHCIALAS W TYM ZDANIU PRZEKAZAC) Pupils go to school with pleAsure without any stress. It's my dream to be taught in such a future school.

wytłumacz najpeierw dlaczego nie moze

merix-
et tu-

jak tak czytam to co poprawilem, to widze, ze sporo nie wylapalem:)
Ale to przez zagadywanie na gg:D

future schools - lepiej school of the future
division INTO
pupils learn something what - bez SOMETHING
they really like and what they are interested in*

It's my dream to
>be taught in such a school of the future*

juz nie rozdrabniajmy sie:]

paula
>juz nie rozdrabniajmy sie
No, to ' don't teach your grandmother how to suck eggs'.

otoz jak jeszcze nie zdazylas zauwazyc napisalam to wczesniej ;d a skoro Ty najpierw mi nie chcialas wytlumaczyc to znaczy ze sama do konca nie wiesz:) moze Ci sie pomylilo z 'such as...',

Terri,

Not really, I've got my own vision-
But that's another story :)

nie zalapalas ;]

ja wiem., Ty jeszcze nie wiesz, że nie wiesz

to twoje tłumaczenie:

"tam nie moze byc: ''such A school'' takiego czegos nie ma, mowi sie np 'such a nice gift' - 'a' piszemy razem z przymiotnikiem, w tym przypadku bedzie same 'such school'"

tylko chyba pomyliła ci sie różnica pomiędzy zastosowaniem so/such. "a' piszemy razem z przymiotnikiem" - tu akurat przymiotnik nie ma nic do rzeczy

a dlaczego niby nie moze? poszukaj sobie w internecie pod haslem 'such + NOUN' albo cos w tym stylu.

>i lepiej o wiele brzmi bez 'a'
BRZMI? dla kogo?

dla mnie :D

To bylo pytanie retoryczne. A jestes nativem (albo mieszkasz chociaz w anglojezycznym kraju) zeby tak mowic?