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I live in a flat
In the flat there are two bedrooms.
I have got my own bedroom.I like very much my
bedroom. Also I like listen to music.
I have got my own TV set
I like watch wildlife programme
I have also a green budgie
They Head is yellow.
I have blue and yellow wallpaper in my bedroom
There are lots of things in it
There’s an bed, radio, , furniture,
window,carpet, chair, TV and shelf under a TV.
In my flat is a computer and printer.

bardzo (very much) przewaznie stawia sie na koncu zdania.

np. I like engee very much.

rowniez (also) przewaznie stawia sie miedzy podmiotem a orzeczeniem.

np. I also like To_ja.

po "like" wystepuje albo bezokolicznik (czasownik z "to") albo imieslow czynny (czasownik z koncowka -ing).

np. I like to read books. I like reading books.

>They Head is yellow.
they = oni - 3 osoba liczby mnogiej.

"an" stawia sie przed samogloskami.

>I have blue and yellow wallpaper in my bedroom

Sprobuj inaczej. Zamiast "Mam niebiesko-zolta tapete...", napisz "Tapeta w mojej sypialni jest niebiesko-zolta".

>In my flat is a computer and printer.

To tez lepiej inaczej napisac.