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My story begins in October. Two years ago. I was on a trip to Bulgaria. In my compartment I met two American girls. They were funy and kind, one of then took me to restaurant carriage. The other one had cheanged our bags, I didn't new about that. They get of the train three stations before me. Won I get of the train, in Bulgaria, police officer had grabbed my arm. He took me into his office. He opened my bag and chow me a lot of not mine money. They didn't whant to lisen about these girls frome train. I was in prison for two years, I want to find the girls ...

My story begins in October. Two years ago. (lepiej polaczyc: in October, two years ago}

I was on a trip to Bulgaria. {moze lepiej: I WAS TRAVELLING to Bulgaria BY TRAIN}

In my compartment I met two American girls. They were funy and kind {AND} one of then took me to {THE} restaurant carriage.

{MEANWHILE,} The other one {bez:had} cheanged{pis.CHANGED} our bags, I didn't new about that. {lepiej: changed our bags, WHICH I DIDN'T KNOW ABOUT}

They get of {GOT OFF} the train three stations before me.

Won {WHEN} I get of {GOT OFF} the train {bez przecinka}in Bulgaria, {A} police officer had grabbed my arm. He took me into his office.

He opened my bag and chow{SHOWED?} me a lot of not mine money{money WHICH/THAT WASN'T MINE}.

They {HE - mowiles wczesniej o jednym policjancie} didn't whant{pis. WANT} to lisTen {lepiej: HEAR ABOUT albo LISTEN TO THE STORY ABOUT} about these girls frome train.

I was in prison for two years {AND NOW} I {REALLY} want to find the girls ...

jeszcze: one of THEM (nie: then) took me to the restaurant carriage

about these girls FROM THE train

fuNNy

My story begins in October, two years ago. I was traveling to Bulgaria by train.
In my compartment I met two American girls. They were funny and kind and one of them took me to the restaurant carriage. Meanwhile, the other one changed our bags, which I didn’t know about. They got off the train three stations before me. When I got off the train in Bulgaria, a police officer had grabbed my arm. He took me into his office. He opened my bag and showed me a lot of not mine money, which wasn’t mine. Listen to the story about these girls from the train. I was in prison for two years and now I really want to find the girls ...

całość ma wyglądać tak czy jeszcze coś pomieszałem ?? :]

wyrzuc: not mine
Wstaw: HE DIDN'T WANT TO listen

dzięki wielkie za pomoc ...