bardzo ładnie proszę o sprawdzenie zadania

Describe a member of your family
I and my husband live in a blok of flats on the six floor. We are already married but we are know about three years.
I would like to describe my husband. His name is Karol he's 24 years old. He is tall and bony. He has got long, straight, black hair and grey eyes - which I love. I think he is an attractive man. He is very ambitious and eloquent, he doesn't say much but each word has weight. He is tolerant person but he dislikes those who are arrogant and cowardly. He has got weird personality. He can be very friendly and patient on the other side he isn't polite boy. He is a very active person. The dull routine of everyday life does not suit him at all. He likes to lead a hestic life and he is always on the go. He has got own band, it's name is " ". He sing and play the bass and he also write the tekst. I love when he sing, he decitate me three song - one song for one year we are together. He is rather demanding especialousy for himself.
We spend a lot of time together. Every week we go to the cinema. Karol is keen on horror movies, he has got whole collection. My husband spoil me. He can cook delicious chocolate cake and he can do great coffee.
I like falling asleep knowing that he lai next to me and love me.

Mam nadzieję, że nikomu 'nie zwiędną' oczy jak zobaczą mój tekst.

Mam jeszcze jedną prośbę o sprawdzenie zdań
1 Fill in the correct form of the verbs in brackets
- helen usually watchs (watch) TV in the afternoons buy Mark listens (listen) to music
2 choose the correct item
"whose magazine is that?" "it's Karen's"
who's who whose

WE have already been married but we have known (each other) for three years używaj czasy present perefect jeśli masz słowo already lub od jakiegoś czasu znasz kogoś wtedy słowa since lub for mówią, że masz użyć present perefect.
He isn't a polite boy/ lay next to me

Helen usually WATCHES MUSISZ DODAć DO WATCH ES NIE SAMO S NIE DA SIę TEGO PRZECZYTAć CZTASZ WTEDY łOCZYZ
UżYWASZ SKOMPLIKOWANYCH WYRAżEń DOSYć. LISTENS JEST ok
NIE JARZE OSTATNIEGO
wYDAJE MI SIę, żE CHODZI CI O wHO IS WHO?

bardzo Ci dziękuję za cenne uwagi
już myślałam, że nikt mi nie pomoże - zadanie mam na jutro
a jak byś oceniła to zadanie?

jak byś ocenił ten tekst miało być -przepraszam
z tym watches popełniłam czeski błąd
"używasz skomplikowanych wyrażeń dosyć" -> co to znaczy? czy tekst jest przez to mniej czytelny
przyznaje się, że zdanie "the dull routine of everyday life does not suit him at all. He likes to lead a hestic life and he is always on the go" --->
zaczerpnęłam z jakiejś czytanki, czy bardzo odbiega od całego tekstu? Ale resztę napisałam sama

'I and my husband' (jest przyjete, ze siebie dajemy na drugim miejscu - tutaj My husband and I) live in a bloCk of flats on the six floor.
We are already married but we 'are know' (HAVE KNOWN EACH OTHER about three years.
He is tall and 'bony' (nie uzywamy tego slowa tak - tytaj lepiej 'slender').
...he doesn't say much but each word 'has weight' (nie, ...).
He is 'A' tolerant person...
He has got 'A' weird personality. He can be very friendly and
patient on the other 'side' HAND he (tutaj potrzeba sometimes)isn't 'A' polite 'boy' (nie, nie - boy to on juz nie jest - tutaj MAN).
He likes to lead a heCtic life and he is always on the go. He has got HIS own
band, it's name is "X". He singS (do 3os.l.poj dodajemy -s na koncu)and playS the bass and he also writeS the teXTs. I love IT when he singS, he HAS decitateD 'me three song' (three songs for me) - one song for 'one' EACH year we are together. He is rather demanding especialY for himself.
Karol is keen on horror movies, he has got 'A' whole collection (ale czego? of films?). My husband spoilS me.
I like falling asleep knowing that he IS LYING next to me and THAT HE loveS me.

bardzo dziękuję! ale niestety już za późno. I widzę, że nie będzie dobrze...
wiem, że do 3 os . l. poj dodaje się 's' ale w praktyce jak widzę ciągle o tym zapominam. jeszcze raz bardzo dziękuję. mam nadzieję, że pisemny egzamin poszedł mi ZNACZNIE lepiej