list... swoja werjse napisalem.. prosze o spr..

witam! musze napisac list do kolegi o osobie z którą chciałbym spędzić miesiąc na bezludnej wyspie. szczerze mówiąc nie wiem o czym pisać.. to moja próba..
dear mark,
how are you? sorry I haven't been writing for sa long time but unfortunately I was very busy.I searched one person which will go with me on deserted island. will you go in 2 months on deserted island??
i na tym konczy sie moja pomyslowosc... mam nadzieje ze znajdzie sie ktosc z sercem i mi pomoze.. potrzebuje to na jutro...

tak mysle ze byloby dobre cos takiego...:I had beautiful dream about this desert islnad. I woke up and I realized that I was lying on a sandy beach. There were some palms around. The sun was shining and the sky was blue and clear. I realized that it was a desert island. Because of my hunger and thirst so I decided to go into the jungle and try to find some fruits or some water. Among the strange trees and palm trees I found a river. I drunk some water and it tasted well. While I was looking for some fruits I heard a loud noise. It came from the other side of the river. I started to worry that nobody would find me. This would be a terrible idea.
During the next day I was enlarging my house and pantry and storing some food (bananas, coconuts and peaches). One day when I was exploring the island I caught a goat, then I build a kind of farm next to my shelter. where the goat stayed.
This island looked like a paradise, but on the other hand, it seemed to be full of surprises and unexplored. I think I felt in love with this small isolated world. Next year a ship arrived on my island. I felt there great and at first I didn't want to come back to my previous life, but finally I decided to go back.
Living on this desert island was for me quite an unusual experience. Not many people are given a chance to spend some time away from the civilisation world. It is an unique possibility to be closer the nature. There I felt so independent. Apart from food problems I didn't have any others.
i po tym chcialbym napisac ze ten sen jest ntchnieniem do wyjjazdu.. ale samemu troche sie boje... przydalaby sie pomoc..i cos w tym stylu..
mam nadzieje ze widac zaangazowanie..

Nie wiem, czy to pomoze, ale...

Pewien czlowiek uratowal sie z tonacego okretu i doplynal na bezludna wyspe. Siedzial tam jakis czas i zaczynal juz wariowac powoli, kiedy pewnego dnia zobaczyl, ze z wody wynurza sie postac. Postac zblizyla sie do brzegu i okazalo sie, ze jest to nikt inny jak supermodelka Cindy Crawford. Gosc oczom nie wierzyl, ale jakos sie przemogl i zaczeli rozmawiac, O tym, o owym, az wreszcie zaczal sie romans. Po 2 tygodniach takiego blogostanu, kiedy juz mozna powiedziec, ze wszystkie marzenia faceta zostaly spelnione, nagle odezwal sie do Cindy:
- Cindy, kochanie, czy moglabys cos dla mnie zrobic?
- Alez oczywiscie, skarbie, co tylko chcesz.
- To prosze Cie, zaloz moja czapke i dzinsy i udawaj przez 5 minut, ze jestes moim kumplem Bobem.
- Nie ma sprawy.
Zalozyla czapke i dzinsy.
- Hej, Jack! Co tam slychac, stary? - mowi Cindy.
- Hej, Bob! Jak dobrze, ze cie widze. Sluchaj, stary, nie uwierzysz, z kim sypiam od dwoch tygodni...

zaraz to sprawdze, daj mi chwile

>zaraz to sprawdze, daj mi chwile

Myślę, że juz nie trzeba sprawdzać:

https://www.ang.pl/list_swoja_werjse_napisalem_prosze_o_spr_59109.html

Pomyliłam adresy:

http://www.bryk.pl/teksty/gimnazjum/j%C4%99zyki/angielski/23109-a_desert_island.html

how are you? sorry I haven't been writing for sa{SO} long {bez:time} but unfortunately I was very busy.I {searched one person-WAS LOOKING FOR A PERSON} {which will-WHO WOULD} go with me {on-TO A} deserted island. {will you go in 2 months on deserted island?? - PERHAPS YOU'D LIKE TO GO FOR 2 MONTHS?}
I had {A} beautiful dream about this desert islnad. I woke up and I realized that I was lying on a sandy beach. There were some {palms-moze: PALM TREES} around. The sun was shining and the sky was blue and clear. I realized that it was a desert island. Because of my hunger and thirst{,} {BEZ:so} I decided to go into the jungle and try to find some {fruits-FRUIT-niepoliczalny rzeczownik} or some water. Among the strange trees and palm trees I found a river. I {drunk-DRANK} some water and it tasted {well-GOOD}. While I was looking for some {fruits-FRUIT}{,} I heard a loud noise. It came from the other side of the river. I started to worry that nobody would find me. This {would be a terrible idea- WOULD HAVE BEEN TERRIBLE albo WAS A TERRIBLE IDEA}.
During the next day I was {enlarging - EXTENDING?} my house and pantry and storing some food (bananas, coconuts and peaches). One day when I was exploring the island I caught a goat, then I build a kind of farm next to my shelter. where the goat stayed.
This island looked like a paradise, but on the other hand, it seemed to be full of surprises and unexplored. I think I {felt-FELL} in love with this small isolated world. {Next-THE FOLLOWING} year a ship arrived on my island. I felt {SZYK: 2-there 1-great} and at first I didn't want to come back to my previous life, but finally I decided to go back.
Living on this desert island was {BEZ:for me} quite an unusual experience {FOR ME}. Not many people are given a chance to spend some time away from {the civilisation world - FROM THE CIVILISED WORLD, ALE LEPIEJ: FROM CIVILISATION}. It {is-WAS} {an unique - A UNIQUE - pamietaj, ze uzycie a/an zalezy od wymowy, nie pisowni. UNIQUE zaczyna sie od gloski /ju/} possibility to be closer {BEZ:the} nature. {SZYK: 2-There} {1-I felt so independent}. Apart from food problems I didn't have any others.
i po tym chcialbym napisac ze ten sen jest ntchnieniem do wyjjazdu.. ale samemu troche sie boje... przydalaby sie pomoc..i cos w tym stylu..
THE DREAM WAS SUCH A GREAT INSPIRATION FOR THE IDEA OF GOING AWAY. I HOPE YOU WILL JOIN ME.

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