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When my friens and I decided we were going to holiday we don't haven nation how many we are met. When were driving car on the sea suddenly we lack benzine so we are must finden some place we where stay for the night because don't nowhere station benzine.
Fortunately we were finded old haus not far highway. It was haus by nobody don't resident. When we were go to entry we saw only old furnitures and two beds whis to stay on centre. We were very tiring so we going to sleep. Very strong dream we break somebody steps. When I lihgt torch suddenly quiet down. After by long time we are can fall asleep becaus were terrifing this stran situation.The day after we leavethis strang house. We found station benzine, fill up and we going to on the sea.
When I come back to hous tell my parents ahat happen. We says that in this haus one man commit a suicide and sonn after that he killed own wife.

Ja niestety nie zabiore sie za to, (chociaz chetnie innym pomagam) bo wczoraj mialam taki milutki komentarz:
"a jeśli nie potrafisz mi pomóc to lepiej nic nie pisz, może problem tkwi w tym, że sama nie potrafisz poprawnie tego napisać...?"

Bardzo cie przepraszam że Cię urażiłam ale powinnas mnie zrozumieć. Nikt niechciał mi pomóc a ja sie bałam że dostane jedynke, a angielski jest moją słaba stroną i niemem zbyt dobrych ocen.Jeszcze raz Cię przepraszam i gdybys mogła to mi pomóż.Proszę