Poprawilam to - prosze zauwazyc, ze jak piszemy, to ma byc czytelne dla kogos, trzeba uzywac przecinki i malenkie slowa ktore podpowiedzialam, (choc niepowinnam, i tylko napisac...blad) -
About the good and bad points of usage internet. (to nie jest zdanie - prosze popraw).
I think it's AN issue to be discussed because everyone can find 'ourselves' (po co to?) something 'what' WHICH can be helpfull or disturbING in use.
At the beginning in my opinion 'plus' (nie - tutaj trzeba advantage)OF THE usage of internet for everyone is that we have wide access to many sources of information from 'country' (ktore?) and THE world or writing materials WHICH ARE helpful in education or just some interesting piece of gossip from world of showbiznes or sport. (to jest za dlugie zdanie - zrob 2)
Recently very popular is THE website "youtube" where we can hear many funny
records or watch many music clips or documental films.
Second website in my opinion most popular to searching things in
internet what we 'needed' NEED is "google". It's very easy and 'fragrance' (fragrance to jest 'zapach' to polsku - chyba tego nie mieales na mysli?) in use to people 'in' OF different age GROUPS.
Next 'plus' (advantage)..I think 'about that everybody knows' (zla kol slow...THAT EVERYONE WILL KNOW ABOUT) 'It's' THE e-mail WHERE we can
without 'exit' (jak juz to exiting, ale lepiej uzyj LEAVING) our house send messageS to family or friends OR some music file, pictures or document files.
Is that A plus? I don't know. I always liked THE old method 'to send' OF SENDING letterS to friends. I'm talking about pen and card but 'time was' TIMES HAVE changed and with time people.
'Plus after plus' (to nie matematyka - znajdz inne slowa) so next A very popular and well-liked thing for net surfers are programs like gadu-gadu, (przecinek) tlen or skype WHERE we can comunicate/talk with people, (a co sie slato z pezcinkiem?) friends in every part of world or even take a videoconferance if we have AN internet-camera.
Last Plus 'i' (I piszemy duza litera i to zawsze) think is that we can download many things to our computer. 'i'm talking about' (to jest niezgrabne- dlaczego nie uzywasz ...such as..) movies , mp3 , books and 'many many else' (many other things)..
But everything 'what' WHICH haS A plus must have A minus...'what can be bad points so' (czy to jest zdanie?)? I think 'it will be' THERE ARE many virusES in THE internet 'what' (co sie dzieje z tym 'what' to nie zawsze odpowiada polskiemu 'co' a i nawet tak nie mowimy) WHICH- we can download to our computers with e-mails. ONE example is THE TROJAN virus WHICH CAM destroy our 'hdd' (a co to takigo?) and erase our files whICH we have. So
I think nobody 'wanna' (tego nawet nie poprawiam, ale uwierz me, to nie jest prawidlowo napisane) this on 'his' (o kim tu mowa?) computer.I think that (ale co?)will be THE only one 'bad minus' (a czy sa 'dobre minusy?'), one but very threatening.
At the end in my view, (chyba juz nie ucza gdzie sie daje przecinki, ale one sa potrzebne) I think THAT THE internet should be in every house and in
school because IT HAS MORE 'plus' ADVANTAGES than DISADVANTAGES.