Prośba o sprawdzenie eseju

Temat przeniesiony do archwium.
Wiem, że ten esej jest długi, niemniej jednak liczę na cud w postaci jakiejś dobrej osóbki, która pofatygowałaby się i go sprawdziła.
To naprawdę ważna dla mnie praca i bardzo mi zależy na tym, żeby jakoś brzmiała.

Arguing against globalization is like arguing against the laws of gravity

Globalization is well-known and quickly spreading nowadays. No matter how sceptic our disposition towards this process may be, globalization is something impossible to curb.
We can distinguish three basic types of globalization: economic, political and cultural. The last one is the most conspicuous while talking about ordinary citizens’ daily routine.
The world seems to be shrinking; cultural and social differences between countries are getting less and less distinct. Most of us have realized that ‘global village’ is something our world is truly converting into. We have lost a great deal of our national identity in favour of united world.
National traditions are gradually losing their importance being replaced by mass culture.
There are the same restaurants – McDonald’s or Pizza Hut – in the USA, German and Australia. There are the same films and the same clothes. People listen mostly to the same music. There are the same large corporations which lord it over the smaller ones.
However, unification has not yet risen up to a dramatic extent, what does not deny that there should be borders put on it. On the other hand, such borders would just slow the process down, but nothing or nobody is capable to stop it.
After years of striving for boundless world we should be aware that different countries will no longer be treated as independent unities. If we snapped to the past for a while, we could easily see how globalization stepped forward. A few dozen years ago each province or county was meant to be different from another one and independent. Then differences between parts of the country became nearly invisible. Then it can come to treating few continents as a whole.
If we do not lose controle of this situation, globalization might be very profitable.
It is definitely connected with a great amount of advantages: the less developed countries have a chance for a dramatically quicker modernization; new useful technologies and ideas are spreading very quickly over the world. Generally, we have a far greater access to something widely understood as “information”.
However, at the very beginning, to make use of aforementioned profits, we must accept the fact of globalization. It is a natural process and soner or later, it had to begin.
It is no use in trying to isolate countries anew, because ‘internationality’ is just necessary.
Thus, it is very difficult to be ‘international’ and to cooperate without deriving patterns from cultures and countries we cooperate with. The essence is not to accept everything blindlessly but to derive what is the best and to keep in mind that in spite of globalization we are obliged to guard our national and regional traditions as well.
Globalization is often perceived as no more as unification. On the contrary, globalization is meant to convert our society into a united, but still internally diversified one.
Globalization is well-known and quickly spreading nowadays. (popraw to zdanie, cos tu nie tak)
No matter how scepticAL our disposition towards this process may be..
The last one is the most conspicuous 'while' WHEN talking about ordinary 'citizens'' (wg mnie nie potrzeba apostr) daily routineS.
We have lost a great deal of our national identity in favour of 'A' united world.
National traditions are gradually losing their importance AND ARE being replaced by mass culture.
'People listen mostly to the same music' (tutaj moze dodaj, ze people of the same generation, i.e. young or older).
There are the same large corporations which 'lord it over' (to jest kolokw-prosze zmien) the smaller ones.
However, unification has not yet risen up to a dramatic extent, 'what' does not deny that there should be borders put on it. (sprawdz jeszcze raz to zdanie, cos tu nie tak)
On the other hand, such borders would just slow the process down, but nothing
or nobody is capable 'to stop it' OF STOPPING IT.
If we 'snapped' (prosze o inne slowo - moze reflected) to the past for a while, we could easily see how globalization HAS 'stepped' (cos tego slowa tutaj nie lubie - moze inne) forward.
A 'few dozen years ago' (to okreslenie cos nie tak-moze inaczej) each province or countRy was meant to be different from another 'one' (niepotr) and BE TOTALLY independent.
'Then' (cos z tym 'then', moze uzyj slowo 'later') differences between parts of the country became nearly invisible.
'Then' (znowu, tutaj trzeba inne slowo) 'it' (do czego to 'it' sie odnosi?) 'can' (nie rozumiem tego 'can' tutaj) come to treating few continents as a whole.
If we do not lose 'controle' (ortog) of this situation, globalization might
be very profitable.
'It' (ale co? z czym to sie laczy?) is definitely connected with a great 'amount' (cos tego slowa tutaj nie lubie - moze 'great many', ale wtedy bez 'of') of advantages: the less developed countries have a chance for a dramatically quicker modernization; new useful technologies and ideas are spreading very quickly ALL over the world.
However, at the very beginning, to make use of 'aforementioned' (ale to co wymieniles, to nie sa 'profits' w sensie finansowym- moze inne slowo)profits, we must accept the fact of (mnie sie wydaje, ze tutaj cos brakuje np. worldwide) globalization.
It is a natural process and sOoner or later, it had to begin.
It is no use in trying to isolate countries 'anew' (nie rozumiem, co to tutaj robi), because 'internationality' is just necessary (mozna dodac...because....).
Thus, it is very difficult to be 'international' and to cooperate
without deriving 'patterns' (to slowo jakos mi nie pasuje tutaj..moze cos innego) from cultures and countries 'we' (ale dlaczego od razu 'we', przedtem nic o 'nas' nie mowiles) cooperate with.
The essence is not to accept everything 'blindlessly' BLINDLY, (przecinek przed 'but') but to derive what is the best (ale co?)and to keep in mind that in spite of globalization 'we are obliged' (a kto tak mowi- lepiej...it is in our own interest to guard) to guard our national and regional traditions as well.
Globalization is often perceived as no more 'as' THAN unification.
On the contrary, globalization is meant to convert our society into a united,
but still internally diversified 'one' (ale 'one' what?)

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