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Bardzo prosze o sprawdzenie mojego eseju na temat: Is it better to study abroad than to study in the native country? za wszelkie poprawki bede wdzieczna :*


Percent of studying yought has increased in the last ten years in Poland. Recently, young people willing to study have to face the problem which university to choose or where to study. There are always two possibilites: to study in the country or abroad. Some people claim that it is better to study abroad, but that solution has as well advantages as disadvantages.

The most important advantages of studying abroad are high qualifications that we can gain during the studies in the forgain country. Employers usually look for the well educated employees and foreign universities seem to give a high level of education.

Another advantage of studying abroad is getting to know other cultures and people from around the world. We can always meet new friends and broaden our horizons.

On the other hand, there are also disadvantages consequential of studying abroad. The main drawback of that kind of studying is high cost of education. Young people studing abroad usually have to work, which can difficoult to accommodate with school.

An addictional disadvantege of studing abroad is long distance from home. For some people it is difficoult to spend long time afar off their families.

In conlusion, studying abroad has both advantages and disadvantages. In my opinion studying abroad can bring a lot of satisfaction and prepare for being a high qualificated worker. Nevertheless, everyone willing to study abroad should consider both prons and cons of that kind of studying.

THE percent of studying 'yought' (ortog) has increased in the last ten years in
Poland. Recently, young people willing to study have to face the
problem OF which university to choose or where to study.
Some people claim that it is better to study abroad, but that solution has 'as well' (tego nie rozumiem, czy AS MANY?) advantages as disadvantages.

The most important advantages of studying abroad are THE high qualifications that we can gain during the studies in 'the' A 'forgain' (ortog)
country.

The main drawback of that kind of studying is THE high cost of education. Young people studing abroad usually have to work, which can 'difficoult' (ortog) to accommodate with 'school' (ale wczesniej mowisz o Unis?).

An 'addictional' (ortog) disadvantege of studing abroad is THE long distance from home. For some people it is 'difficoult' (prosze sprawdz jak to slowo sie pisze) to spend long time 'afar off' AWAY FROM their families.

In 'conlusion' (ortog), studying abroad has both advantages and disadvantages.
In my opinion studying abroad can bring a lot of satisfaction and
prepare (kogo? czego?) for being a high 'qualificated' QUALIFIED worker. Nevertheless, everyone willing to study abroad should consider both 'prons' and 'cons' (tych slow nie lubie - prosze pisac ..advantages/disadvantages, the good points as well as the bad points) of that kind of studying.