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Dear Santa Klaus,
My name is Dagmara. I know that you are busy, but I hope that you will find moment on reading this letter.You usually receive letters from children. They ask about new doll, car, ponies or plush bears. I would want to it fulfilled my the largest dream.I would want very to my father recovered, but or this can to be present from Santa Klaus? I am afraid that you fulfil only material dreams.Therefore I have short list. My mum made happy to from new mixer, for dad health, but this probably not possible and so aquarium. For sister and brother-in-law Beetle(grabus-auto) or different antique car.My niece made happy to with doll or ponies. I have hope that you will fulfil these requests. Making happy someone from my family you will make happy and me. I do not want no presents it will suffice me smile close.
This is my address:
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I hope that you and your in red nose reindeer you will come flying to fulfil dreams.

Best wishes,
Dagmara

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Dear Santa 'Klaus' Claus,
I know that you are busy, but I hope that you will find A moment 'on reading' (nie - tutaj to read) this letter.
They ask 'about' FOR A new doll, A car, ponies or plush bears.
I would 'want' (want to jest nie za bardzo grzeczne slowo w zdaniu 'I want' lepiej I would like) FOR YOU TO fulfill my 'the' (poo co to 'the') largest dream.
I would 'want very' (very much like) 'to' FOR my father TO recoveR (ale z czego-trzeba dodac), but 'or this can' (co to? - chyba can this be a) present from Santa Claus? I am afraid that you fulfill only material dreams.
Therefore I have A short list.
My mum 'made happy to from new mixer' (tego to nawet nie rozumiem), for dad's health, but this IS probably not possible and so I WOULD LIKE AN aquarium.
For MY sister and brother-in-law A Beetle or A different antique car. My niece 'made' (zle - tutaj would be) happy to with A doll or ponies. I 'have' (niepotr) hope that you will fulfil these requests.
Making 'happy someone' (someone happy - nawet jest taka piosenka - make someone happy - graja bvezsensownie w TV-ale widac, ze nikt na to uwagi nie zwraca) from my family you will make 'happy and me' (me happy too).
I do not want 'no' ANY presents it will suffice 'me smile close' (cos tu nie tak).
I hope that you and your 'in' (niepotr) red nose reindeer 'you' (niepotr) will come flying to MY HOUSE TO fulfill MY dreams.