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Dear Kate,
How are you? I hope that you passed your driving test. My eźams came out and I can start relaxing.
I'm writing to tell you about my plans for next year. I'm going to go to Australia and work as a waitress.
But my parents don't sgree with my decision. When I told them what I want to do They were shocked.Their reason against my departure is that I will be there alone and something may be happen. But I don't agree. I'm 18 years old and I'm reasonable and responsible. My parents expect that I will continuate my study. I think staying abroad don't trouble in educate. I'm going to work and in second year start study. I'm really sad and disappointed that my parents don't understand me.Please, give me an advice, what should I do.
I must finish because I have a quitar lessons.
Take a care,
XYZ
Kilka "typos" sie wkradlo (poprawilam) i pare rzeczy na koncu.

Dear Kate,
How are you? I hope that you{'VE} passed your driving test. My eźams{EXAMS} {came out - ??? ARE OVER?} and I can start relaxing.
I'm writing to tell you about my plans for next year. I'm going to go to Australia and work as a waitress.
But my parents don't s{A}gree with my decision. When I told them what I wantED{nastepstwo czasow) to do T{t}hey were shocked.Their reason against my departure is that I {will-WOULD} be there alone and something {may be - BAD MIGHT/COULD} happen. But I don't agree. I'm 18 years old and I'm reasonable and responsible. My parents expect that I will {continuate-CONTINUE} my study. I think staying abroad {don't trouble in educate - nie rozumiem tego. Co masz na mysli?}. I'm going to work and in {THE} second year start {TO} study. I'm really sad and disappointed that my parents don't understand me.Please, give me {an advice - SOME ADVICE, rzeczownik niepoliczalny, nie ma a/an} {what should I do - szyk twierdzacy - ABOUT WHAT I SHOULD DO albo zacznij nowe zdanie= pytanie: What should I do?}.
I {must- HAVE TO} finish {NOW} because I have a quitar{pis. GUITAR} lessons.
Take {bez:a} care,
XYZ
wiellkie dzięki. w tym zdaniu "I think staying abroad {don't
>trouble in educate" chcialam napisac ze pobyt zagranicą nie przeszkadza w dalszej nauce.
A, to mozna roznie, np:
I think going abroad doesn't mean that I can't continue my studies.

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