Sprawdzenie raportu

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Tarnobrzeg is a small town in the east- south of Poland. The aim of this report is about tourism in this town.

There are several things that tourists will find attractive
a) The night life is good. It has got cinema, few discotheques and many pubs.
b) In addition, it has got many places to eat- cheap and tasty dinner
c) The accomodation in Hotel Nadwiślanski is excellent, because is situated in green place nearly river Wisla.
d) The buildings are old but beautiful. E.g. Castel in Baranow Sandomierski. Travel there by bus is cheap and comfortable.

On the other hand, tourist might find some things disappoinitng
a) The local buses are old. Some of them are also damage. Travel by bus is cheap. However, there are rare.
b) there are not enough shops. The nearest shopping center is 30 km far in Stalowa Wola.
c) Tourists aren't feel save at night in weekend. they will be more police officers on streets.

To sum up, tourist find in Tarnobrzeg a lot of things to do and see. On the other hand they think that Tarnobrzeg is too small and boring city. In addition tourist don't pay a lot.
The aim of this report is 'about' TO EXPLAIN about the tourism in this town.
a)'It' (to znaczy nightlife ma cos? - to jest niewyrazne) has got A cinema, few discotheques and many pubs.
b) In addition, it has got many places to eat-cheap and tasty dinnerS
c) The accomodation in Hotel Nadwiślanski is excellent, because IT (moze lepiej ..the hotel)is situated in 'green place' (cos tu nie tak) neaR THE river 'Wisla' (ale Wisla to jest po polsku).
d) ok
On the other hand, A tourist (czy tourists l.mn?) 'might' MAY find some things 'disappoinitng' (ortog)
a) Some of them are also damageD.
'However, there are rare' - tutaj cos brakuje w tym zdaniu.....
b) The nearest shopping centRE is 30 km AWAY 'far' (niepotr-zle slowo) in Stalowa Wola.
c) Tourists 'aren't feel' (kto tak uczy?- ARE NOT) 'save' (zle - tutaj SAFE) at night 'in' DURING weekendS.
'they' (chyba nie to slowo - THERE) will be more police officers on streets.
To sum up, touristS find in Tarnobrzeg a lot of things to do and see.
On the other hand they think that Tarnobrzeg is too small and A boring
city. In addition tourist don't 'pay' (czy masz na mysli spend?) much.

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