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Dear Sir / Madam

I saw your advertisemen in the “Photo” newspaper yesterday and I am very interested in becoming a member of the ahotohrapher’s world club. Hovewer, I would appreciate it if you could give ma some more information.
First of all, Can you explain what you maean by ‘activities relating to photography’? Could you please let me know how much membership cost? I would also like to know if there is a special discount for students at your club.
Secondly, I would like to tell me, whan opening and closing times to join yours club. Could you tell me, if we have qualifited instructors in photo?
Thank you in advance for your help. I look forvard to hearing from you as soon as possible.

Yours faithfully,
Monika

Dear Sir / Madam
I saw your 'advertisemen' (ortog) in the “Photo" newspaper yesterday and
I am very interested in becoming a member of the 'ahotohrapher's'(ortog) world
club. 'Hovewer' (ortog HOWEVER), I would appreciate it, if you could give 'ma' (ortog) some more information (about...?).
First of all, can you explain what you 'maean' (ortog) by 'activities relating
to photography'? Could you please let me know how much THE membership
cost?
Secondly, I would like YOU to tell me, 'whan' (ortog) THE opening and closing times ARE to join 'yours' YOUR club. Could you tell me, if we have 'qualifited' (ortog) instructors in 'photo'? (cos nie rozumiem tego 'photo' -wydaje mi sie ze trzeba photo CLUB)
I look 'forvard' FORWARD to hearing from you as soon as possible.

Dear Sir / Madam

I saw your advertisement in the “Photo” newspaper yesterday and I am very interested in becoming a member of the photographer’s world club. However, I would appreciate it if you could give mi some more information.(about? Tu nie chodziło mi o konkretne informacje -tylko ogólnie(jak to we wstępie), że takich informacji potrzebuję)
First of all, Can you explain what you mean by ‘activities relating to photography’? Could you please let me know how much the membership cost? I would also like to know if there is a special discount for students at your club.
Secondly, I would like you to tell me, when the opening and closing times are to join your club. Could you tell me, if we have qualified instructors in photo club?
Thank you in advance for your help. I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.

Yours faithfully,
Monika




Teraz dobrze? :)

However, I would appreciate it, (przecinek) if you could give 'mi' ME some more
information.
First of all, 'Can' (dlaczego 'can' duza litera, po przecinku) you explain.. Could you please let me know how much the membership costS?
Could you tell me, if we have qualified instructors in THE photo club?

Dear Sir / Madam

I saw your advertisement in the “Photo” newspaper yesterday and I am very interested in becoming a member of the photographer’s world club. However, I would appreciate it, if you could give me some more information.
First of all, can you explain what you mean by ‘activities relating to photography’? Could you please let me know how much the membership costs? I would also like to know if there is a special discount for students at your club.
Secondly, I would like you to tell me, when the opening and closing times are to join your club. Could you tell me, if we have qualified instructors in the photo club?
Thank you in advance for your help. I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.

Yours faithfully,
Monika









?? :-)

teraz lepiej.
Czy sama widzisz roznice pomiedzy tym pierwszym listem a teraz?

niestety tak... : (
bardzo dziękuję za pomoc...