Rozprawka na temat studiów zagranicznych

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More and more young people from Poland decide to leave the country and start studying in Great Britain. Why do they look for new opportunities abroad? Is it worth it?

One of the main advantage of studying in England or Ireland is fact that possibility of getting a good job is much bigger. Certificates of well known universities are important for employers in the whole world. Secondly, it is a great occasion to meet interesting people, new culture and also to improve the command of English and knowledge of Great Britain. Finally, people from Poland have chance to attend lectures given by talented and experienced professors. They always make the chosen subject of studies interesting and easy to understand.

On the other hand, studying abroad requires a good command of foreign language. It is necessary to communicate and handle all duties in student’s life.

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rozprawka nie jest dokonczona :( brak mi pomyslu.. nie wiem, jakie mozna tu jeszcze dolozyc argumenty "przeciw" - moze macie jakies pomysly..? no i zakonczenie, w ktorym podaje swoje stanowisko - takze brak pomyslu, wiec mysle, ze najlepsze bedzie opowiedzenie sie "pomiedzy".

z gory wielkie dzieki za pomoc, pzdr!
Oprocz zakonczenia brakuje tez poczatku.
>mozna tu jeszcze dolozyc argumenty "przeciw"

rozstanie z rodzina i przyjaciolmi, a co za tym idzie, brak 'support network' w razie potrzeby
roznice kulturowe
A co sie stalo z 'a' i 'the'? Nie uzywasz tego? Dlaczego?

One of the main advantage of studying in England or Ireland is THE fact
that THE possibility of getting a good job is much 'bigger' (moze inne slowo) Certificates 'of' FROM well known universities are important 'for' TO employers in the whole world.
Secondly, (tutaj cos brakuje) is a great occasion to meet NEW AND interesting people, (tu cos brakuje) new culture and also to improve the command of THE English LANGUAGE and THE knowledge of Great Britain. Finally, people from Poland have 'A' chance to attend lectures given by talented and experienced professors.
On the other hand, studying abroad requires a good command of 'A' foreign
language. It is necessary to communicate (tutaj ja bym cos dodala) and TO handle all 'duties' (moze inne slowo) in A student's life.
"support network" ? - co to? :)

nie ma poczatku? wg mnie jest. krotkie wprowadzenie na temat tego, o czym bedzie rozprawka :)
uzywam :) ale jak widac czesto mi umyka.. :/

spora pomoc z twojej strony, thx!
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