Bardzo proszę o sprawdzenie rozprawki ^^

Mógłby mi to ktoś sprawdzić? Rozprawka jest na ocenę, a ja pewnie narobiłam jak zwykle pełno błędów :/ Baardzo bym była wdzięczna gdyby się ktoś uprzejmy znalazł :)

In today’s world many young and old people go to live in different countries. Those who leave their own country to live in another have their own reasons to do this and that decision would change their life. Nowadays emigration movements grow more intense.

Firstly I would like to say about reasons why people leave their homeland. It also obvious that the most important for young persons is find good paid job, and if they can’t find it in his country they would go to live in country where as they judge, they will be better paid. Some people leave their home land for political reasons, when they don't feel safe in this place, for example during wars. Some of us, like to travel and when they fall in love with some state, they decide to settle there. What is more adopted country could ensure them new and more easy life. They would like to know diffrent cultur and people.

On the other hand it is true that there are consequences of living in other states. Emigrants could meet with reluctance and with unacceptance on the part of natives. Moreover, if the immigrant does not know the native language of the state where they arrived, they will have big trouble with communication. People would miss for their family and friends.

In my opinion live in different country isn’t a good idea, because I am emotionally connected with my homeland. However leave country for few months or years is better concept. We could save some money, have new experience and meet new people.

mógłby mi to ktoś dzisiaj sprawdzić?? potrzebuje koniecznie bo muszę się jeszcze tego nauczyć :/ Bardzoo proszę :)

Pooomocy heh ;)

In today's world many young and 'old' (nie lubie uzywac tego slowa - mozna ..and not so young) people go to live in different
countries. Those who leave their own country to live in another have
their own reasons to do this 'and' (jabym tutaj dala KNOWING) that that decision would change their life.

Firstly I would like to 'say' (lepiej explain, talk about) about THE reasons why people leave their homeland. It also obvious that the most important (ale co?) for young 'persons' PEOPLE is TO find A 'good' (nie - tutaj WELL) paid job, and if they can't find it in 'his' THEIR country they 'would' WILL go to live in A country where as they judge, they will be better paid. Some people leave their home land for political reasons, when
they don't feel safe in 'this place' (nie - int heir own country), for example during wars. Some of 'us' (dlaczego wczesniej mowisz o 'people' a teraz o 'us-nas. Albo 'oni'-they albo 'my'-us,we), like to travel and when they fall in love with some 'state' (tutaj COUNTRY), they decide to settle there. What is more THEIR adopted country could 'ensure' PROVIDE them WITH A new and 'more easy' EASIER life. They would like to GET TO know diffErent culturES and people.

On the other hand it is true that there are consequences of living in
other 'states' COUNTRIES.
Moreover, if the immigrant does not know the native language of the 'state' country where they HAVE arrived, they will have 'big trouble' (prosze o slowa ktore pasuja do reszty- tutaj lepiej...DIFFICULTIES) with communication.
People would AlSO miss 'for' (nie rozumiem uzycia tego slowa tutaj) their
family and friends.

In my opinion 'live' LIFE in A different country isn't a good idea, because I
am emotionally connected with my homeland. However leavING THE country for
A few months or years is A better concept. 'We' (lepiej IT is possible to) could 'save some money' (how?-), have new experience and meet new people.

Stokrotne dzięki !! :)