Sprawdzenie recenzji filmu STEP UP

Review of film STEP UP
It isn t famous melodrama. It was filmed in USA in 2006 and man listened little about this dance of passion. The stage manager is Anne Fletcher.
I get a DVD with this film from my friend. I wanted it looked, because it s about dance and I danced in dance-club for 5 years, still I finished I love dance extant, but I return to film... I included DVD and I delighted already beginning. A music and acting especially dancing is fascinating. Music is compose by Aaron Zigman and main parts play Channing Tatum (Tyler Gage) and Jenna Dewan (Nora Clark). They are really a extremaly good dancer. Tyler Gage is a young boy, who live in vicarious family and hasn t got a job. He start to steal a car with colleagues. On other hand is a beautiful, rich girl, who bestes to contract with dancing mill. Everything can be good, but their ways meet. What do they feel themselves? Love to dancing. What do they differ? Money... But they don t want, that man compare them. The film show many problems of teenagers- Which man can conquer stereotype and which proves a girl that s a love unite them. How much films is similar to STEP UP? Why do I write about it? Because it s another. Beauty showes in this film is over all. Fineness, perfection, spontaneity and this love to dancing- somethink wonderfull. Selection of parts is excellent. He is well-built and dances in his style, which nobody can. She is beautiful, able and friendly. Tylor s black friend was great, too. A “thin”, which call a one boy died and his brother despairs a long time. It a really good play part. Once more I return to music, because in this man can love. Such good becoming music is in a few films. Since beginning we sitting agog and wait what will be next. In not any stage we don t bore- about it goes surely.
I can recommend STEP UP, because it a beautiful film, which always wiil be in yours memory. I wait with hankering for second part. I hope, that will be such good which first.

Basiu-
Prosze napisz to uzywajac swoich slow- i prosze nie tlumacz tym kiepskim translatorem, bo z tego belkot wychodzi.
...I wanted it looked, because...
...I hope, that will be such good which first....

Ale ja to sama pisałam, a nie za pomocą translatora...Proszę pomóżcie mi...

Proszę o jakieś wsakzówki co mam poprawić... Gramatykę, czy słowa są źle dobrane?

Basiu-
Prosze nie robic sobie zartow z tego co ja pisze.
Jak ja napisze, ze to z pomoca translatora, albo slownika - to tak jest. Koniec kropka. Jak nie, - to prosze napisz mi tutaj, ktory nauczyciel Ciebie tak uczyl konstrukcje zdan w jez. ang. Nie pisz nawet, ze znasz gramatyke - bo z tego co tutaj napisalas, to niestety tego jakos nie moge wywnioskowac.
Widze, jeszcze dlugo droge nauki przed toba.

Napisze gdzie jest zle.

It isn't (cos tu brakuje) famous melodrama. It was filmed in (cos tu brakuje)USA in 2006 and (tu cos brakuje) man (jaki man?) listened (tu cos brakuje)little about this dance of passion.
I 'get' (zly czas) a DVD 'with' (nie to slowo-OF) this film from my friend.
'I wanted it looked' (to sa bzdury...I wanted to look at it - chyba z tym sie spotkalas w jakims podreczniku), because it's about (tu cos brakuje) dance and I danced in (tu cos brakuje)dance-club for 5 years, 'still' (zle slowo) I finished I love dance 'extant' (to slowo nie istnieje-zle slowo), but I return to (tu cos brakuje)film...
'I included DVD and I delighted already beginning' (nawet nie moge wywnioskowac co masz na mysli).
Music and acting especially dancing is fascinating. (dobre zdanie)
Music is composeD by Aaron Zigman and (tu cos brakuje) main parts (tu brakuje czasow) playED (tu cos brakuje) Channing Tatum (Tyler Gage) and Jenna Dewan (Nora Clark). They are really 'a' (niepotr) 'extremaly' (ortog) good 'dancer' (tutaj potrzeba l;. mnogiej bo mowisz o 2 osobach). Tyler Gage is a young boy, who liveS (he-to 3os.l.poj - LIVES) in (tu cos brakuje) vicarious family and hasn't got a job. He startS (he-to 3os.l.poj - prosze pamietac, ze do czas, reg dodajemy cos) to steal a car with HIS colleagues. On (tu cos brakuje) other hand (ale kto-zapomnialas wymienic) is a beautiful, rich girl, who 'bestes' (to slowo nie istnieje w jez. ang - nie rozumiem tego) to A contract with (tu cos brakuje)dancing mill.
'Everything can be good, but their ways meet' (z tego zdania wyglada, ze bylo dobrze, ale oni sie spotkali - ale to nie tak).
What do they feel themselves? (dobre zdanie)
Love to 'dancing' DANCE.
'What' HOW do they differ? Money... But they don't want, 'that man compare them' (jaki man?). The film showS (film to it- a it to 3os.l.poj - prosze pamietaj) THE many problems of teenagers- Which (tu cos brakuje) THAT (tu cos brakuje) man can conquer (tu cos brakuje) stereotype and which proves THAT a girl (tutaj sie gubie) that a love uniteS them.
'How much films is similar to STEP UP?' (teog nie rozumiem)
Why do I write about it?
'Because its another' (ale co?)
'Beauty showS in this film is over all' (cos tego zdania nie rozumiem).
Fineness, perfection, spontaneity and this love to dancing- 'somethink' (ortog) wonderfull. Selection of ACTINGparts is excellent.
He is well-built and dances in his style, which nobody ELSE can.
A “thin" (nie rozumiem tego pojecia), which 'call a one boy' (cos tu nie tak) died and his brother despairs a long time.
'It's a really good play part' (tutaj nie wiem co masz na mysli - it's a really well-played part?). Once more I return to music, because 'in this man can love' (cos tu nie tak).
Since (tu cos brakuje) beginning we (tu cos brakuje) sitting agog and waitING FOR what 'will' WOULD be next.
'In not any stage we don t bore- about it goes surely' (co? po,mysl tylko o tym zdaniu)
I can recommend STEP UP, because it IS a beautiful film, which 'always wiil' (WILL ALWAYS be in 'yours' YOUR memory.
I wait with hankering for (tu cos brakuje)second part.
'I hope, that will be such good which first' (pomysl, co ty napisalas).

Poprawiłam ile umiałam, ale nadal proszę o pomoc...
It isn't a famous melodrama directed by Anne Fletcher. The film is set in the USA in 2006, but we listened a little about this dance of passion. I got a DVD of this film from my friend. I wanted to look at it, because it's about a dance and I danced in a dance-club for 5 years, though I finished I still love dance, but I return to the film...I turned DVD of STEP UP and when I saw beginning I was already happy. Music and acting especially dancing is fascinating. Music is composed by Aaron Zigman and a main parts played the Channing Tatum (Tyler Gage) and Jenna Dewan (Nora Clark). They are really extreme good dancers. Tyler Gage is a young boy, who lives in a vicarious family and hasn't got a job. He starts to steal a car with his colleagues. On a other hand she is a beautiful, rich girl, who tries to a contract with a dancing mill. What do they feel themselves? Love to dance. How do they differ? Money... But they don't want, that people compare them. The film shows the many problems of teenagers- Which (tu cos brakuje) THAT (tu cos brakuje) man can conque a stereotype and which proves that a girl (tutaj sie gubie) that a love uniteS them. (chciałam napisać: jak pokonać stereotypy i jakudowodnić dziewczynie, że się ją kocha)
'How much films are similar to STEP UP? (ile jest filmów podobnych do STEP UP?)
Why do I write about it?
'Because it s another film.
'Beauty shows in this film is over all' (Piękno pokazane w tym filmie przewyższa wszystko)
Fineness, perfection, spontaneity and this love to dancing it s something wonderfull. Selection of actingparts is excellent. Tyler is well-built and dances in his style, which nobody else can. Nora is beautiful, able and friendly. Tylor s black friends are great, too. A “thin" (nie rozumiem tego pojecia), which 'call a one boy' (cos tu nie tak) died and his brother despairs a long time. (chudy jak nazywali jednego z chłopców zmarł, a jego brat długo rozpaczał). It's a really well-played part. Once more I return to music, because she is exceptional. Everybody can fall in love her. Such good becoming music is in a few films.
Since the beginning we are sitting agog and waiting for what would be next. Every stage is interesting and we shouldn t be bored. I can recommend STEP UP, because it is a beautiful film, which will always be in your memory.
I wait with hankering for the second part. I hope, that would be as good as first.

Prosze tego nie robic. Ulozylas bardzo trudny tekst w jez. polskim, a twoj ang. NIE JEST na tym poziomie - jestes za ambitna myslac, ze dajesz sobie rady. Nie dajesz. Prosze jeszcze raz przerobic gramatyke i konstrukcje zdan - i slownictwo, ktorego Ci tutaj duzo brakuje.

It 'isn't' (IS czy ISN'T?) a famous melodrama directed by Anne Fletcher. The film is set in the USA in 2006, but 'we listened' (co to ma do filmu?) a little about 'this' THE dance of passion.
I wanted to look at it, because it's about 'a dance' and I danced in a dance-club for 5 years, 'though' (zle slowo- AND ALTHOUGH) I finished, (przecinek) I still love TO dance, but NOW I WILL return to the film..
I turned (ON czy OFF?) (a gdzie 'article'a, an, the-sama wybierz?)DVD of STEP UP and when I saw (a gdzie article a, an, the) beginning I was already
happy.
Music (do czego? do filmu - to prosze napisac)is composed by Aaron Zigman and 'a' THE main parts (tu brakuje czasownika) played BY 'the' (po co to 'the' tutaj?) Channing Tatum (Tyler Gage) and Jenna Dewan (Nora Clark).
They are really extremeLY good dancers.
He starts to steal a car with his 'colleagues' (nie za dobre slowo - colleagues to wiecej z pracy, tutaj FRIENDS). On 'a' (dlaczego lubisz 'a' a nie 'the' - prosze wybierz poprawnie) other hand she is a beautiful, rich girl, who tries
'to a contract with a dancing mill' (tego dalej nie rozumiem).
'Love to dance' (Kocham tanczyc - ale kto?).
But they don't want, that people (tu brakuje modala) compare them.
..The film shows the many problems of teenagers. SUCH AS THE ONE that A man can 'conque' a stereotype and which proves 'that' TO a girl that 'a' (niepotr) love uniteS them.
'How 'much' (prosze przypomnic sobie kiedy sie uzywa 'much' a kiedy 'many') films are similar to STEP UP?
'Beauty 'shows' (czy to odpowiednik -pokazane?) in this film 'is over' (zle slowa- podpowiem conquers) all'
THE selection of acting parts is excellent. Tyler is well-built and dances in 'his' (zle slowo) style, which nobody else can. TylEr's black friends are great, too.

Dalej nie podpowiadam, bo widze, ze to niema sensu. I tak nie rozumiesz co piszesz po ang.

Wiem, że mój angielski nie jest na zbyt wysokim poziomie, ale właśnie chce się uczyć i proszę o wskazanie dalszych błędów...

It is a famous melodrama directed by Anne Fletcher. The film is set in the USA in 2006, but we listened a little about the dance of passion. I got a DVD of this film from my friend. I wanted to look at it, because it's about a dance and I danced in a dance-club for 5 years, and althoug I finished I still love to dance, but now I will return to the film...I turned on the DVD of STEP UP and when I saw a beginning I was already happy. Music and acting especially dancing is fascinating. Music to film is composed by Aaron Zigman and the main parts played by Channing Tatum (Tyler Gage) and Jenna Dewan (Nora Clark). They are really extremely good dancers. Tyler Gage is an young boy, who lives in a vicarious family and hasn't got a job. He starts to steal a car with his friends. On the other hand she is a beautiful, rich girl and tries for contract with a dancing mill.(-stara się o kontrakt z wytwórnią taneczną) What do they feel themselves? Love to dance. (miłóść do tańca) How do they differ? Money... But they don't want, that people have to compare them. The film shows the many problems of teenagers- . Such as the one that a man can surmount a stereotype and which proves to a girl that love unites them. How many films are similar to STEP UP? Why do I write about it?
Because it s another film.
Beauty appears in this film conquers all'
Fineness, perfection, spontaneity and this love to dancing it s something wonderfull. The Selection of acting parts is excellent. Tyler is well-built and dances in himself style, which nobody else can. Nora is beautiful, able and friendly. Tyler s black friends are great, too. A “thin", which 'call a one boy' (cos tu nie tak) died and his brother despairs a long time. (chudy jak nazywali jednego z chłopców zmarł, a jego brat długo rozpaczał). It's a really well-played part. Once more I return to music, because she is exceptional. Everybody can fall in love her. Such good becoming music is in a few films.
Since the beginning we are sitting agog and waiting for what would be next. Every stage is interesting and we shouldn t be bored. I can recommend STEP UP, because it is a beautiful film, which will always be in your memory.
I wait with hankering for the second part. I hope, that would be as good as first.

Dobrze, ze sie chcesz uczyc, ale POMALU, nie wszystko na raz, bo Ci sie tylko pomiesza.

>It is a famous melodrama directed by Anne Fletcher
Jesli to jest 1. zdanie, to raczej powinnas napisac co to za film (tytul), bo inaczej nie wiadomo co jest to "it".

The film is set in
>the USA in 2006, but we listened a little about the dance of passion.

listened tu nie pasuje; moze mialas na mysli "heard"? Ale nawet z heard to zdanie nie ma sensu: akcja filmu rozgrywa sie w USA w 2006, ale my malo slyszelismy o tym tancu pasji. Co ma jedno (akcja) z drugim (co slyszelismy) wspolnego?

A teraz?
It isn t a famous melodrama directed by Anne Fletcher. We can heard a bit about the dance of the passion. The film is set in the USA in 2006. I got a DVD of this film from my friend. I wanted to look at it, because it's about dance and I was dancing in a dance-club for 5 years, and althoug I have finished with it still love to dance, but now let's go back to the film...I turned on the DVD of STEP UP and when I saw a beginning I was already happy. Music,acting and especially dancing is fascinating. Music to the is composed by Aaron Zigman and the main parts are played by Channing Tatum (Tyler Gage) and Jenna Dewan (Nora Clark). They are really good dancers. Tyler Gage is an young boy, who lives in a vicarious family and hasn't got a job. He starts to steal cars with his friends. On the other hand there is a beautiful, rich girl who tries to get a contract with a dancing mill. What do they feel? Love to dance. How do they differ? Money... But they don't want people to to compare them. The film shows many problems of teenagers- . Such as the one that a man can surmount a stereotype and which proves to a girl that love unites them. How many films are similar to STEP UP? Why do I write about it? Because it s another film.
Beauty appears in this film conquers all.
Fineness, perfection, spontaneity and this love to dancing it s something wonderfull. The Selection of acting parts is excellent. Tyler is well-built and dances in his own style. Nora is a a beautiful,and friendly. Tyler s black friends are great, too. A “thin", as his called by everyone dies and his brother despairs for a long time. It's a really well-played part. Once more I return to music, because she is exceptional. Everybody can fall in love with her. Such good becoming music is in a few films.
Since the beginning we are sitting and waiting for what would be next. Every scene interesting and we shouldn t be bored. I can recommend STEP UP, because it is a beautiful film, which will always be in your memory. I can't wait for the second part. I hope, that it would be as good as the first one.